Reviews for He Mele No Lilo
Lucyole chapter 10 . 3/10
Really good story. It was sweet, exciting, interesting and dramatic too.
Naite-Laef chapter 10 . 5/25/2019
holy cow! i love your stories, but wow. this one was so seamlessly weaved from two different tales, and it's really touching... great job. this is probably my favourite of yours so far. keep on!
famliy of the geeks chapter 10 . 9/3/2018
I read this a long time ago but I remembered it recently and decided to leave a review.
This is so good! You did a good job combining elements from the Lilo and Stitch movie (which we all love) with elements from dbz. I still get feels from this when I think about it sometimes. Good work!
GothicCheshire chapter 10 . 3/21/2018
Boi, this was unnecessarily great XD I wasn’t expecting for it to be as good as it is, and I’m not going to lie, the initial image of Piccolo being the answer to a wish is just too great. You also balanced the two storylines quite well. Nice job, thank you for writing!
DBZ GIRL7 chapter 10 . 1/5/2018
That was beautiful.
Well done!
Jaylo chapter 1 . 1/7/2017
I'm.. honestly, I'm lost for words. This has got to be, like, the Mona Lisa of the fanfiction world. Only, I think it would be awesome if there was a sequel, even if it was just a oneshot or something, later in life when Gohan's 'I'm friends with aliens! One of them's a mass-murderer!' secret was being found out - I mean, something as big as that must be hard to keep quiet about. But other than that, this is a masterpiece, and for lack of a better word, perfection. I love it. No complaints here!
Guest chapter 10 . 12/19/2015
An awesome crossover! This story turned out perfect!
Shyy-Ra chapter 10 . 11/13/2015
Well, this has got to be one of the cutest things I've ever read. I was grinning like an idiot the entire time!

Great job!
Guest chapter 10 . 10/16/2015
It can't be a coincidence that He Mele No Lilo was sung by the Kamehameha Chorus in the soundtrack for the movie.
pikaace chapter 10 . 12/10/2014
Oh...my...god...that...WAS FUCKING ADORABLE! The fluff! The feels! It's just...just...ugh! I can't take it! This story was AMAZING!
super-hot-saiyan chapter 10 . 12/28/2013
I stayed up until half four in the morning just to read this fanfic! Your character development was exceptional, especially in Piccolo. You let Kami and the other Namekians see the change in Piccolo's heart without making it sound unrealistic. I really felt for the characters, and that is NOT a common thing when I read fanfictions. Your language flowed beautifully, and you described things and people in a way that I myself have had difficulty even finding the words for. You're honestly, truly gifted.
Keep it up, keep improving, and well done!
Hollydoor chapter 10 . 11/24/2013
Tha... That's... Sniff... Beautiful... I... I.. I... Loved it!... Sniff...
Chem-Death chapter 10 . 10/21/2013
I love it, love it, love it! Nice flow, nice story, nice everything!
Such a sweet ending. :')
Chem-Death chapter 8 . 10/21/2013
That's one scary woman!
MetaBrain chapter 10 . 10/15/2013
I would personally LOVE to see Piccolo go to school with Gohan. XD Imagine the chaos, though. Poor Krillin.
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