| Reviews for Hot Mess |
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Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2019 The last two jokes |
VeronicaElianna17 chapter 1 . 4/24/2018 Hahahaha! i love it! |
just a reader chapter 1 . 2/10/2017 although, it was smut (and quite a lot...), I LOVED it! I don't know why, but I didn't freak out, or get bored, or get disgusted by the smut/sex scenes...weirdo, because I'm not that kind of person and I hate it when my classmates and friends talk about those kind of things...BUT those aren't important! VERY NICE STORY,WITH CLEVER PARTS IN IT,CLEVER DIALOGUES BETWEEN THE COUPLE AND CLEVER JOKES (as about the "Pillsbury" thing: ROTFL! I died from laughing!)Your last joke...well...just know it was rather clever and "a little bit" smutty and "some kind" of an innuendo (if I got it right...), but good :P CONTINUE WRITING, I LIKE YOUR STORIES! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2016 No |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2016 i love this fanfic! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2014 Nice with both jokes though I thought the Pillsbury one was better |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2014 *sets up an automatic self-fanner because she's going to need one till eternity* My, do you know how to write the beauty that is Ian Kabra :D |
ummm chapter 1 . 5/25/2014 this was...gross. you should have said smutty in the summary. |
BFF with books chapter 1 . 4/25/2014 Great details! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2014 uh... gross WTF ! |
BitterSweetChaoticSerenity chapter 1 . 4/19/2014 XD This was the best thing that has happened to me all day. |
heavenly chapter 1 . 1/6/2014 Pillsberry me lily and I love the joke |
AmianLuver9999 chapter 1 . 10/4/2013 Hahaha |
awesomeness chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 awesome just plain awesome I loved the ending the most. |
helyon chapter 1 . 7/1/2013 Awesome! I absolutely love your writing. I think I have rarely come across fics where hot smut and humor were combined well. Amy/Ian is my favorite pairing; and you've made this piece such a sweet treat (pun?!). Great job! |