Hiya! I like your story so far and I hope that you'll continue it soon. Hee hee! I like'd that last part when Yugi remarked about the upcoming battle.

Oh my gods, this just has to be Yugi x Mokuba! It's the perfect set up! And there were so many Yami/Amunet x Seto hints 'locking them in a closet', lol.

Fuck you asshole

KND: unbelievable i can't believe that they dared to become Atem in Yugi and pylon is now that a Hikari can exercise the Yami no games
Vanellope: i agree
Hiro: if but must admit that Amunet is cool even wihthout the help of the cute Yugi
Yugi: to who call cute? (Yugi says that while Yugi comes out with Ralph and Serena come wihth snacks

The duels are terribly written, and I think you're trying too hard show everyone 'strong' females, which does the characters, whom were originally males no justice whatsoever. You would have been better off with original characters. And I really don't see much of a plot going, unless you make this up as you go.

Super Chapter

lol wow that was funny I love it. Are you going to make yugi and mokuba a couple? :3

I love the scene when Makuba shed them the closet that was HILARIOUS

Please Continue? I love this story

CONTINUE!

quick question is this story cancel

Please update this story soon

I can't wait to read the next chapter so keep updating please because I think that this story is interesting and funny

Maybe it's none of my business, but you have way too many stories running at the same time. You should simply focus on updating one regularly.

Nice work! This is an excellent story so far!