Reviews for Snap Shots
ShadowAlchemist503 chapter 154 . 11/30/2019
Lmao Edward and Roy arguing so childishly over the shower was great, and Riza being so irritated that she just let Havoc go first, that really made me laugh! Also Roy's reason for wanting to go after her... how mushy, I love it :')
ShadowAlchemist503 chapter 153 . 11/30/2019
I feel like I keep saying this every chapter, but again, very sweet. I love how concerned he was, specifically worrying that because her father likely died of a lung-related disease, what if her cough turned into something worse? And then Riza being like nah man I'm fine, and then them cuddling afterwards! Also, this line;

"Too tired to protest about fraternization regulations or to hold out against the basic human instinct for cuddling."

I thought this was really heartwarming!
ShadowAlchemist503 chapter 152 . 11/30/2019
Aha, so that's how she got her infamous hair clip :D I like how he can't help but flirt with her, it's very cute!
ShadowAlchemist503 chapter 151 . 11/30/2019
Aw, I really loved this chapter, and them caring so much but also, particularly on Hawkeye's end, being so anxious about showing it due to Pride potentially lurking anywhere, which I completely understand, like that would be actually so terrifying.
ShadowAlchemist503 chapter 150 . 11/29/2019
Again, really sweet! I love how you write their trust with each other, and the ending was really cute too!
ShadowAlchemist503 chapter 149 . 11/29/2019
This was so cute :D I like how they went about warming each other's hands haha, and everyone being so surprised by Riza looking so nice!
ShadowAlchemist503 chapter 148 . 11/29/2019
Lmaoo I was already laughing but that ending really got me! I only got grazed by poison ivy (or something similar) on my ankle once, but having your whole face and body and... other parts sounds like a nightmare haha. I'm glad I came back to this fic, with so many chapters left too :D
IarIz chapter 67 . 5/1/2019
xD WHERE? wrist? back?
IarIz chapter 63 . 4/30/2019
and we all love Riza, xD me included.
IarIz chapter 28 . 4/22/2019
i want to see Kimblee pants on fire O.O
ShadowAlchemist503 chapter 147 . 4/12/2019
Here I am, back again for this fic, still in my phone this whole time :'D. Aw haha this chapter was so funny/sweet, still getting to him despite sleepwalking/"sleepflirting" lmao.
IarIz chapter 10 . 3/27/2019
LMAO xD
IarIz chapter 3 . 3/6/2019
ahahah xD this is godd read.
ShadowAlchemist503 chapter 146 . 12/15/2018
Aw, I loved this chapter! Ed is such a sweet kid, it's always a bit heartbreaking seeing him beat himself up over something. But hey, at least Riza and Roy were on top of it and Black Hayate seems like he's going to be okay! Great chapter, as usual!
fallenangel7583 chapter 300 . 11/30/2018
These were fantastic! Thank you for devoting six years of your life to this fandom. I started reading these a few years ago, after discovering FMA, but had apparently lost track of them. I reread all of them over the past few weeks. They are so cleverly crafted and so damn perfect that I can't help but feel they are canon. I love the dynamics of the duo and the clever banter, sass, and overwhelming adorable sweetness. Also, i love how you wrote Roy into the roll of Unca Roy and how he had a continued relationship with Elicia. It warms my heart every damn time. I'm glad to hear you've considered retuning to these stories and I hope you do. Thank you for dedicating your time to the fandom and bring so willing to share with the rest of us.
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