I agree with everyone else here... this story was HOT! I especially enjoyed the obvious love and affection between Tamaki and Haruhi which made their lovemaking more real and erotic rather than just a soulless copulation between indifferent self-gratifying partners. My favorite part of the story, though, was Kyoya’s inexperience in such matters and his realization that life was more than just business dealings and numbers on a page or computer screen. I know other reviewers have expressed incredulity at his naïveté at his age, but when I was twenty, most of my friends and I were equally inexperienced. Of course, that was likely because we were all religious at the time, but I think Kyoya’s devotion to his business dealings is just as fervent as any religious practitioner. His lack of knowledge in this area is quite believable in that context, as is his awakening. Thank you for that unexpected addition to an already exceptional story!

Holy Shit. That was incredible. I could totally see it happening in front of my eyes. You do great work. Poor Kyoya. He can come over anytime and I'll teach him a thing or two. He can even tie me up.

This is like my 5th time reading this and I never commented because I could not form words, let alone a complete sentence...It. . Good!
Despite this being a fanfiction, I could SEE all of this happening! The characterizations and the descriptive writing...Hon, I could sing your praises all day! Thank you so much for sharing this.

You broke Kyoya!Lol

This was excellent.

Oh. My. God. That was fucking awesome!
First time I read a voyeur fic, and probabily last, 'cause it doesn't appeal me, but this was totally awesome! Poor Kyouya, His last straw of innocence is gone x
You write beautifully, it's really difficult to find fanfictions with such writing skills, I'm amazed.
Sorry, I really suck at reviewing Just know this is a little pearl.

Holy shit. Lol that was amazing and very well written. I think you captured all their characters really well. Thanks for writing.

Well, that was amazing.
Nuff said.

*giggle* *slowly lays head on table* *giggle* *trying not to get caught*

Holy shit...i cant...i just..nhzgwkwbdkbdjdmskebsvxysbskwnshsisndn it took me two days to read this fic! I was so intense i had to read it alone cuase i kept squeling and shouting! WOW u have talent great job!

That was awesome. Mainly Hikaru and Kaoru. Lol.

OH MY GOD I WENT TO YOUR PROFILE AFTER READING YOUR RYOSAKU FIC AND PRACTICALLY SQUEALED WHEN I REALIZED THAT IT WAS YOU WHO WROTE THIS TAMAHARU LEMON. :O

Okay so that got me a little 'hot' but it was amazing

This was some heavy stuff! Loved the concept and the writing. Well done! (Can't say I totally bought Kyouya being so very virginal at 20, but a few years younger? Yeah, maybe then, but Haruhi and Tamaki wouldn't have worked out as well as they did so, I'll suspend my disbelief over that and go with it as an extreme extension of his coldness and self control. Not after this day, however!)

Damn!