Reviews for Harry Growing up at The Dursleys
Guest chapter 16 . 9/22
If you have a cold, take Zicam. Zicam helps with cold and allergy relief, if you take the strongest kind of Zicam, it will help you with all of your cold and allergy problems. If not, I suggest that you take NyQuil or Benedryl during the night.
Guest chapter 13 . 9/22
You need to make Draco Malfoy very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very nice.
Guest chapter 13 . 9/22
You need to add a lot more new people in here a lot more new girls and a lot more new boys Harry Potter goes to Ravenclaw.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/22
SarahBeth Morgan, Belinda Holloway, Melissa Turner, Miranda Salley, Linda Horris, Felicia Roland, Samantha Blackmore, Ciara Litorno, Harry Potter, Dudly Dursley, Hermione Granger, Draco Malfoy, blaze Zabini, Anthony Goldstein, Emily Winston, Amelia Johnston, Kathy Lanson, Debra Cherish, Natalie Conson, Sandra Johnson, Rabecca Taylor, Liana Cortez, Angela Williams, Katrina Moralez, Alissa Martin, Jasmin Wilson, Makenna jenkins, Christina Morris, Marina Hintzman, Ravenclaw!
Guest chapter 12 . 9/22
REALLY REALLY NICE Draco Malfoy, Ravenclaw!
Guest chapter 10 . 9/20
Her name is Hermione.
Pronunciation: (her, my, oh, knee
Guest chapter 8 . 9/20
This is a constructive review, you need to correct all of the misspellings and errors in the way to improve your spelling is to keep reading a lot of books and spelling all the words out loud while recording yourself doing so.
Guest chapter 8 . 9/20
Ravenclaw Ravenclaw
Guest chapter 6 . 9/20
Ravenclaw
mysteryheart chapter 10 . 7/16
perhaps you could correct your grammar? I recommend grammarly
AlexiaJunior chapter 10 . 4/23
It's not 'Hermionie' its 'Hermione'. There isn't an 'i' in between the 'n' and the 'e'.
I'm not trying to be rude, I just want to help you out, so please do not take this in a bad way!
~AlexiaJunior
romionemakesmepuke chapter 2 . 4/20
Hermione!
beautifuldreamer23 chapter 24 . 3/21
In answer to your question about capitalization and punctuation...

Yes I do know how to use them correctly. However, I started this story quite a bit ago. I do not claim to be perfect at writing and I never have. I am aware there are many mistakes in this story as I have reread it myself since it had been so long. I could go through and re-write everything and make it better. Although, if I am being honest I just don't have the time to go back and make everything perfect. I write these just for fun,and it gives me a way to wind down when I get the chance to write. So if you like them fine and if not that is your opinion.
DONE394 chapter 7 . 2/28
Don't you know how to use capital letters and punctuation?
Moarmystaytinyuniengine chapter 24 . 12/27/2019
Hi there! This story is really nice, and I love that Ron is adapting to Slytherin very quickly.
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