kakashi: 'blah blah blah logical and annalytical stuff'
naruto: 'they are threat. they shall die'

ahhhhh, whenever the RLD (red light district) is mentioned you know that r pe is going to be involved

Awesome story thanks for the read

Naruto acing the written test seems unrealistic. If he lived on the streets and had no education he shouldn't even be able to read or right let alone pass the written exam for shinobi and do better than clan heirs.

To be honest out of all the elements I think Earth is the one least suited for Naruto. I think Naruto would have been suited better for water, fire or lightning with wind coming after this and then Earth. As earth stands for mostly stubborn people and this Naruto isn't stubborn.

I just wish to say my friend the story you have crafted is one of the finest I have had the pleasure to don't fall into the trap of others simply making their character overpowered but instead explain how he got each of his abilities and why they are at the level they are. Sure even through timeskips you make sure that you continue to give reasons for why his skills have grown. Thank you and if you ever continue this story I will gladly read it. I am probably going to take a look at your profile now to see if their is any other stories that I would enjoy. Thank you and have a great day

Eu

also please continue

honestly I think most chapters in this fanfic are done perfectly fine with a few things I don't love. and while your right it will be hard to up some chapters I would recommend having the next couple fights be based on tai, Ken and minor ninjutsu then that space should probably be enough to have a lot more destructive fights and then you can make sure not to do anything that leaves you with that problem again

also you should take in Itachi's desease as a factor

not to mention sameheda litterly turns on kisame because he preffered killer bee and hichibi's chackra and at the end of the fight is when sameheda switched sides, against Naruto in single combat later on when nauto is stronger the blade would not only turn on kisame as it did for b but it would probably do so sooner

quero mais

And here’s where the story goes fucking garbage . It’s boring as shit and completely dumb to read naruto fighting in Kiri for no absolutely fucking reason. Should’ve honestly just time skipped to shippuden arc. Such a shitty author this story is fucking trash. Short ass chapters

Danzo is a monster

did anybody not catch zabuza getting freakin aroused