| Reviews for Monsters of War |
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Wavywavy chapter 37 . 5/5 "You look like the Major." Oof. You know, for a while, I was struggling to recognize what this chapter made me feel. Then, I realized it just reminded me of the times when I was a teenager and had to take care of my family's friend's kids when they visited. As in, some kids were charming and easy to amuse, while others were mentally draining, even if they were good kids and meant well. Rip is seriously giving the vibes of the latter category. Plus the added creep bonus since, you know, the whole vampire thing. I mean, at least her social circle is expanding? That aside, I'm wondering what the Captain said. |
TheLostDiamond0 chapter 37 . 5/2 Your story is AMAZING! I beg you: update! You are one of the few online writers who write stories about the Captain! I swear, you are great! |
xenocanaan chapter 37 . 5/1 I can’t wait to read more! |
NightlyRowenTree chapter 37 . 5/1 Thanks for the new chapter |
Wavywavy chapter 36 . 2/8 Oh, yay! You're back! Oof, having to change plans you had already made is so much work, but it's great you came up with something at last. Especially because that cliffhanger in chapter 35 was sooo illegal. I was dying to know what happened next. Alrighty, so Amelia and Alucard definitely goofed up that last time, and now there will be a hella lot of consequences as a result. I'm really curious about the Captain's mood, tho. Why the heck is he so angry? (Well, aside from being stabbed and nearly having Alucard spiriting our girl away). Like, is he mad that Amelia's kidnapping would have meant Millennium's failure? Was he pissed because he was almost bested? Or was the risk of her being taken away the thing that ticked him off by itself? (Lol, I'm definitely shipping this too much). Maybe some sort of combination? Or could there be another reason? Regardless, I sure as heck felt nervous for Amelia when he got so mad. Jesus. Stay strong, Amelia. And also, thanks for writing, Harp! |
Alalaes chapter 36 . 2/8 Thank you for the update. Really enjoyed this chapter. |
TishaLiz chapter 36 . 2/7 Please don’t leave for so long, I love this still so much. |
NightlyRowenTree chapter 36 . 2/6 Thanks for the new chapter |
AutumnOrchid chapter 36 . 2/6 Everytime I see an update I literally drop whatever I'm doing just to read. This is so good and I cant wait for the next chapter! |
xenocanaan chapter 36 . 2/6 I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Dormidera chapter 35 . 1/10 Great story! |
Anon chapter 35 . 8/11/2019 I absolutely love your fanfic it’s so well done and you’ve taken the time to really draw out your character! That being said I hope you update soon! :)! |
happysmilesofdeath chapter 35 . 5/22/2019 Oooh I wonder what will happen now that she has summoned a familiar! |
NightlyRowenTree chapter 35 . 5/22/2019 Awesomeness |
GrimmaulDee chapter 35 . 5/22/2019 Yeeeeeeah! Another wonderful chapter with an agonizing cliffhanger! |