I adore this story, it's so seemingly simply, but incredibly complex at the same time.
I don't know how you do it, I'm in awe of your writing. I'm making my way through all of your Quinntana stories, but this is by far my absolute favourite. You make the audience feel everything that Quinn is going through.
I realise you haven't published anything on here in years, but I hope that you come across this message at some point, and that it finds you well.

That was sweet! You should make a part II. In San POV and a part III for them both.

It's so beautifully written and ths story it's so bittersweet... I just loved it.

Beautifully written. Very cool idea

Clever contemplative Quinn. I liked it.

Awesome story! I really enjoy your writing.

Love. This. Punctuation never sounded so romantic until now.

So artful and articulate, wonderful story flow, so very much in a compact space. A real thinker's piece.

Although the literary techincalities were a little hard to swallow as symbols and motifs, they were brilliant by the end of it all. It also tied so neatly with Quinn's double major ;) all in all the really like the depth of each character and how it stayed in canon for the most part. I think the most obvious note of applause is for Quinn's phyiscal fragility. That and for creating Santana x Quinn, lords -how I loved your Santana. Anyways, I really, really, really wish that Ou would continue writing for this shipping but honestly, you should just continue writing. Period.

Interesting. I like it.

I love this. Truly.

Quinn/Punctuation should totally be a 'ship! Loved this!

this was such a perfect one shot. So beautiful. :)

-kennedy

this was fantastic!

This is brilliant. At first i thought that Quinn's initial thoughts as a comma applied to her situation with her parents. Which like, is super depressing to think that SHE was the only thing joining the two of them when they disowned her then blah I got what you were saying about not be able to stand alone and being together out of a want but not need with Santana and Tina and omg you're brilliant. This was amazing. Thank you. :)