Reviews for The Things He Hides
Shadow Lestrange Potter chapter 1 . 11/5/2016
OMG! I really enjoyed it. It was so lovely. Lovely and sad. But with a beautiful end.

Congratulations for your incredible job. It really was an amazing fic. I loved it! It goes directly to my favorites.
Thank you so much for sharing it with us. ;)
Kisses.

P.S. I’m sorry if there are mistakes in my review, English isn’t my native language.
somebody chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
i liked it
Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
No not at all it was perfect
annaise chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
cool
annalise chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
thats star i love it
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
aw i love it so cute!
Jack chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
I think you did wonderfully! the characters were very like themselves
Tbird2290 chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Not to be rude or anything but FYI robins real name is richard or dick Grayson.
Secret Agent Awesome chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
I don't think you can go wrong. I just don't.
And you shouldn't worry about it being OOC, it was perfect. :') Besides, if you read it to yourself in the voices of Hynden Walch and Scott Mensville, everything is in character. Seriously. The back of a cereal box. XD
TeenTitan99 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
omg that was too sweet! like a lollipop!
LOLLIPOP, LOLLIPOP, OOOO LOLLI- LOLLI - LOLLI- LOLLIPOP!
POP!
sorry! anyway, that was great! I love your stories!
Bobby Corwen chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
I've said it before, and I'll say it again: I loved it. I love seeing the more vulnerable side to Robin. He really does hide too much; it can't be healthy.

I think that's a good lead-in to answer your questions. 1) No, I do not believe that you made Robin too over dramatic. Even the toughest of people break down sometimes. It was inevitable that Robin would go over the edge. I think you captured the moment perfectly. 2) I think one flashback was good enough. If you wanted to include more flashbacks, then I think it would have to be more than a oneshot, like more chapters. Like you could've had multiple instances where Robin had to put on a brave face or whatever. Maybe the next day's events after Robin's breakdown. I'm not sure. If you were to add another flashback, I would have put it while Starfire was hugging him. For example, Starfire just embraced him when he remembered his Mom hugging him after a failed attempt of a flip and he scraped his knee or something. That's when Robin would start holding back chocked sobs more. Because the first flashback was pretty detailed and extensive, I would've done something like that to balance it out. If that made any sense. 3) considering the circumstances, I think Starfire sounded perfectly fine. It would be just like her to bust out a mushy comment about how he is perfect and try to comfort him. That's just Starfire; she loves helping people and possesses a heart of gold. I think you did an excellent job :)

Okay, that pretty much sums up my rant. :) I gotta say, out of all of your work that I've read so far, this piece is my favorite. I love when Robin breaks down. He is my favorite character. Boy do I envy Starfire. Continue writing, you're awesome!

-Bobby Corwen
Niani17 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
"I feel that he's a complex person with more emotions than anyone realizes." I totally agree. I have actually seen many different sides of him in different episodes (including the side you mentioned), and because the strong facade he puts on is sometimes more prominent (or just what people remember most about him), from time to time people label him as just that.
Robin was perfect and not OOC. I loved this side of him.
The amount of flashbacks were good. It think if there were more, it would have been overbearing, so you did well. :)
Starfire wasn't OOC. Like you said previously in one of your fanfic's Starfire is several intellectual levels ahead of the other Titans in terms of how she thinks about things. So she was spot on.
As always, this was well written, and I love the Star/Rob moments. . Please write more like this!
KoolBrunette06 chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
This was really cute! I almost broke down when robin did! Kudos friend!
itwontletmedeletethisaccount chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
No! Everything was perfect and plz continue this plz I enjoyed it very much .
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