I hate Gray and both Lucy. Gray is so selfish and so is Lucy.

i loved this, in a weird twisted way. it was an incredible story and i enjoyed it sincerely and it made me feel better about my life at this moment because i am very stressed, it reminded me of how mich worse things could be in my life

wew nalu is the best

Me-he not bad but just sad and too much portrey and not nalu fan or gralu fan or any but good job but next time make it happy ka.

It was really beautiful! I felt bad for Gray and Lisanna from the way you wrote their feelings...masking their true feelings for the other persons feelings...

woow this was super good! i love it! could you review my story? Im a new writer and this is my first fanfic! i love sticy so much :) anyways :)

That's mean. Everyone deserves a happy ending

Oh poor dear Gray... :'(

Aww! I feel so sorry for Gray! :'( On a more positive note , I love this story very much. I think you did a great job portraying Gray's feelings. I hope to read more stories like this! : )

I love this!

That was incredibly sad. It was perfectly written. The ending was just depressing :'(
Nice job! You write very well and I like your writing style. You remind me of a friend who writes like this. She's like the tragedy romance thing and this slightly reminds me of her work.
What I liked the most was how you described Gray's inner feelings. I really liked it. I'm looking forward to more of your work :D

aaaaahaaaaahhaaaaaaa :'( :'( I can't take this I have read wedding dress and unheard feelings now this one too aaaahh :'( why all the pain in the world is for gray he should be happy ! aaah :'( I can't take this I don't like depressing stories as I start sulking...but still I read them o.O anyways _ you wrote well! all the besty write moreeeee!

Hmm... The story is nice but I think you put too many periods. I saw that all the periods were ellipses. Perhaps, you can change that.

Good. And sad for Gray. I almost cried but the tears won't fall naturally