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Hmm, okay, so I'm happy you continued this :3 Thank you xD But please no character bashing on the lady with the lasses, okay? She's cool. But I don't care about Kyohei. So...are you planning on building in any fights within the story? That would be awesome as hell. I dunno, a fiction without a battle is no fiction to me! Thank you again for writing, I really appreciate it!

Sweet This story turned out great so far :D Even though it doesn't look like you're continuing this, I'd be happy if you would. After all, there are so few Kamisama Doll-fictions! Dx I'm shocked! I'll load this section with stories! Anyways, I guess I'll get to my feedback :3 I noticed a few past tense mistakes, you used present sometimes, just as a side note. It would be cool if you could describe the looks of your kamisama doll in the later chapters. And please add a plot twist, I'd be disappointed if you retold the story just with your OC in it. Please continue and spread the Animie! It really needs for FFs! Good luck with everything :3

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please update this is really interesting yer one of the only english kamisama dolls fanfic so please

gomen for bothering ya but please consiter updating if ya aren't please tell me kay

awsome story i sincerily hope ya countine

kaze kaze heed my warning as you sway and sway above the sky you will never reach the heaven as you howel and cry as the moon watches you howl threw the sky
yet not have you reached the light of lights and have been for ever damed to stay bound by your chains they sway and sway and crack and rust but never brake
if the ever were to brake you know in your heart you would never reach the light but be bound to earth with your wings of wind to never to reach high up but to be bouned to this unpure place to wallow and howl in yor self pity

like it i for some reson thought of it well reading this i guess it describes one of the characters not to sure anyway if ya didn't know kazewind gomen if it didn't sound good i came up with it just now

please update

Update, please!

:3 cute!
I realized this show has only two FICs.
Are you continuing this? I'd love to read more, I love Aki XD