| Reviews for Secluded Dragons |
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  Guest chapter 2 . 12/2/2019 Yes Rias I will get on my knees and worship you in slavery |
 dannymask chapter 17 . 10/30/2019 so if you were hiding from ophis in this chapter i'm guessing your dead by now |
| TheBloodTaker chapter 17 . 5/6/2019 Is this now discontinued? |
| PlaguedDemon chapter 17 . 4/26/2019 Kind of disappointing it’s dead. |
| darthvader042 chapter 2 . 3/21/2019 "your left side raises your power by shouting boost, while your left side can take power and add it to your own" hmmm why both on the left? |
| Zaraki Kempachi chapter 1 . 6/4/2018 Haste it for being a slave to Rias . |
| twisterblake2015 chapter 1 . 4/25/2018 nice lot |
| twisterblake2015 chapter 2 . 4/21/2018 good |
| darth56 chapter 10 . 8/23/2017 you are writing a great version of the ori. story and i think it is a great story so please keep it up thank you for writing this |
| justaweekndfan chapter 6 . 8/15/2017 issei making a whole faction full of dragons! awesome dude! |
| Plasma Dragon 312 chapter 10 . 1/3/2017 Personally I hate all the factions because they only like Issei because of his power. Which would piss me off a lot. |
| Houseoftards chapter 11 . 12/21/2016 okay, here's what's wrong with this story, you tried to make him human DURING the story. You sortive tried to do something big to show he is "human" but botched it up. Like during this chapter you showed Issei going out of control with his anger. you did this before with him actually in some sort of control. But all if a sudden he does not the he meets Azazel? huh? an I think you are down playing his power by a lot. since you built him so high you try to hinder him. I thought you would make him Op. (dude, if you did this right this could be a great Gary stue story) but you set limitations and go back on them but he has already broke them. All I wanted to say is that you should have not given him so much power unless you wanted him to be human. An since you killed of one of his lovers he has grown. AND more then got pmore control from being angry. think about it, he lost control so much he beat the shit out of kokaibiel. He would realize "shit, I think I need to think a little more logically". You made him not get made at Gabrial but instead at Azazel who is a little bit above Gabrial. I know this was a smallish part but it can make the difference for some people and show that you need to maybe re-write a little. |
| omegawolf000 chapter 17 . 8/7/2016 This was really awsome wish there was more chapters |
| Iridocyclitis666 chapter 2 . 6/19/2016 very nice story, and i like the turtle picture |
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/23/2016 A you bitch killing issue I hop you die |
