this would make a good speech piece

holy cow this is so well written you HAVE TO CONTINUE!1111 655 PEOPLE are counting 123 ON uUU! CumON YOu gOTTA

everyone had the chance to read and leave a comment to chapter 11 ..13, meanwhile, I'm here still waiting to get past chapter 1 *screams internally*

I'm sorry, it has to be said. You messed up big time. You just really disappointed 654 people by discontinuing.

I feel all sad now like I don't know I just am thank you for a lovely chapter

Damn you made me cry. Thank you for finding a way for Annabeth to break up with Percy besides cheating on him. That has been done so many times its ridiculous. Especially since it never really goes into any detail about why it happened and then retread its not what you think. Great chapter awesome originality.

Excellent

not trying to pressure you as I just saw you have written on your profile, just saying

and also PLEASE don't let this be super slow like last time, the wait was killing me

well... I don't know what to say I'm gobsmacked. the chapters great no denying that, better than the last one. I just never thought you would take down all the chapters and start from scratch and I was so looking forward to chapter 14, and I was liking how the story was going. all well, just keep at this and I hop it's not too different from the original version- just better written- and good luck, all the fans of this story are behind you on this story and choice to re-wright I'm sure

this is a very heart breaking chapter but very good :D

Wow, just wow. Definitely a different take on Percy and Annabeth breaking up. I understand how war effects people to a point so I can see why she needs to get away. I also understand Percy's feelings. Can't wait for the next chapter.

So excited to see the rest of this! Good luck!

I got the alert for the second chapter but when I tried to open it last night and this morning it wasn't loaded. Could you please try and reupload the chapter? Thanks and can't wait to read it!:)

Love it