Do a sequel to this: Garnet x Amber

I have probably reread this about 100000 times now because it's just something so amazing and beautiful that always lifts me up. This is a story I can always go back to because I love how you write the characters, their relationships, and their futures (I didn't know how to much I love Ruby trying to out-father Green, the Ruby/Gold dynamics, or poor Silver who seems to always be stuck with the kids and questioning his life choices lmao). I absolutely adore the way you chose Garnet's name because I think it fits her so well - she has a part of all the dex holders with her.

I don't think I can put it in words about how much I love this story because it's honestly everything I could ever ask for in one. It's beautifully written and leaves me speechless and wanting more because it's just so good. You did a phenomenal job writing this, and I can only apologize for leaving a review and gushing over this wonderful piece so late!

This is such a beautiful fanfiction. I'm shocked at how well the characters are written and how moving the story is. I mean... damn. It's clear that you left some things intentionally unresolved, which really emphasizes the whole "never-ending adventure" that is present throughout the entire Pokemon franchise. It feels as though the story doesn't end here- as though it can't end here, because there's a whole new adventure ahead, just like there always is.

The way you addressed that very same theme with Red was also really enchanting and sweet. Maybe he isn't going on his own adventures anymore, but he's going to become a part of so many other trainers' adventures, and that is so, so meaningful.

I can't even begin to describe how amazing I found this story. You did a magnificent job writing it!

Nice story really loved what you did with the characters. Only real problem i have is the jobs you gave the dex holders though. Yellow i feel should have become a conservationalist for viridian forest, considering her bond with the forest, the nature of her powers, and the experiments team rocket has done with the place it feels a bit too fitting. (Also means she works close to home and near Red). Also wish the sibling esque relationships between silver and blue, and crystal and emerald could of been incorporated, though i guess i dont really know how. Looking forward to the new interpersonal relationships between the dex children, maybe you should keep the relationship between cyan and garnet clean and just make it a surrogate sister relationship, considering how close garnet is to green i think it makes the most sense

Tourmaline is pronounced Tur-ma-leen. Did you know that? Good story though!

I loved your story! You really captured the personalities of the pokedex holders and I really enjoyed the characters that you created.

I want to write a really long and meaningful review about this story that gets across just how amazing and, AMAZING it is, but I have no words. I applaud your skill and talent for making my night. Scratch that, I've been reading it and lost track of time. It's one in the morning now. Totally worth it. Wow. WOW. Your riting skill is just... INCREDIBLE.

Whatever this is, I'm glad I found it. The idea is unique, the writing is good and (even though this is a comment on a 3 year old story) the adventure between Amber and Garnet would be an enjoying read. Also, Garnet is a great character.

This is a cute story haha. I like what was presented, an enjoyable read yay! (:

I loved it. This was perfect. So long, yet so beautiful. I really liked how you explored multiple characters, and went through phases of time. This was just so wonderful. Beautiful. Amazing. A work of art.

I dunno why but I don't like Garnet, she reminds me of a female Green and Silver combined, but I like the story though!

Once again, you have proven to me why you remain to be my favorite Poke'writer to this day. The humor! Fantastic. The characterization? That's your middle name, I swear it. The emotions, the mature dialogue, the insightful lines... Heck, you could probably write about any number of other kinds of fandoms and I'd probably still love it. Your words are just that spectacular. The way you handled all these personalities, canon or OC, ... an individual who doesn't know any better would not be able to tell that those OCs are, in fact, not even a part of the original cast. They are weaved in so naturally and given such humanity that there wasn't even one character that I did not like. Which is strange since with this kind of story length, I would be tempted to skip to the scenes that star characters that matter to me. But right from each character's debut, I was captivated.

I've never even bothered to read about Ruby/Sapphire before (not even by you - gasp! I know) but you have, no surprise..., quickly changed my views on that. Ruby's character is such a riot. My god, from beginning to now (that screeching, ahahaa) - even when I didn't really think much of his character, that kind of personality was the least one I would have expected. He's probably my favorite now, next to Garnet. Garnet is a riot in her own way. Bless Amber and his heart.

After each line-break, I am constantly awed by how well you juggle everybody's post-marriage and for other couples (ahem, Blue/Green), pre-marriage. It goes to show that even when you get together, it's still a journey 'til you keel over and even then.. perhaps that is an adventure in of itself. Thank-you for taking a huge load of your time making this, refining it, and sharing it! If you ever do happen to reveal to us what happened during Garnet and Amber's journey, I will stalk (err, follow) your writing there as well.

oh my god ... such a long chapter
but nice

THIS! THIS! THIS

is literally the greatest piece of pokemon special fic i have ever laid my eyes on. in terms of characterisation, character development, dialogue - everything was so perfect and adorable and wonderful and so nostalgic - so much so that this is practically canon to me -

the only way i could deal with the after-feels of reading this fanfic was to scramble into my basement and read the entire manga series over again, cover to cover

you are an amazing human being for writing this, i apologise for my appalling incoherence but it's just - THE FEELS -

/dies and ascends to heaven

(i know you'll probably never update this again, but i just want to let you know that if you ever do it will possibly be the best thing that has ever happened to my life)

hahahaha laughing. just laughing... anyway that's besides the point. good luck with your writings!