Keep going I love it to much for you to stop

A very bad description of Eragon he must have been miserable after leaving but never weak. Arya is totally out of character and cliché. They look like teenagers when fighting not adults. Why does everyone portray Eragon as a child? HE IS A BLOODY MAN. And why would he bring matters concerning his relationship with Arya between his students he would rather stay secluded and not open up. The plot is good you could edit the descriptions and it would be much better.

Great job keep it up, well written pls update soon

Please continue this story! Your writing style is beautiful and I love your characters and they way you protray them!

Hey there,
I am not going to bother with real criticism. For now, I just want to ask if you plan to ever continue.
If so, rest assured that I will take the time for a real review, as I have really enjoyed this story. If not, I hope you lead a happy life and find joy in whatever you're doing that's not writing fanfics.

Best regards,
Funnyach

A lot of teenage drama in this chapter.
I don't quite get why Eragon would tell all his students about what happened between Saphira and Glaedr.
To which purpose? To needlessly shame her?
Of course the story can teach you something, but that would have worked as well if he had just told them about some dragons from the past with a similar problem.
Certainly better than to tell such an embarrassing story about the being who is closest to you int he whole world.

Fantastic story that got better and better as it went along. A few embarrassing typos 'quiet' instead of 'quite', 'to' instead of 'too' etc. but nothing too unreasonable. Last updated in September 2014, haven't you left us hanging long enough? Please please please please please please update, I need to know what happens with Murtagh, with Arya, with everyone.

You have me and everyone else under your spell, don't be cruel!

Just a quick note about the beginning: the sun sets to the west and Eragon went west of Alegeisia(according to Paolini's map), so his home is to the east of him. So he can't be looking at the sunset and towards his home at the same time. Not a big deal but still...thought I would throw that out there.

Love this story! Can't wait to see what happens next :)

Stories been awesome so far. Very nicely done mate.

WHAAAAAT. Interesting plot twist, who the hell has Arya been with? And by 'been with' I hope you mean they haven't... you know... :S Ah, well. I'll see.

Good chapter, keep it up. :)

Please update sooner

good chapter but update again sooner please

Oh dear Arya, oh dear... xD Jark must have just been like 'Wait, wut?' Hahaha... good chapter, very humorous.

Keep it up.

ahaha i love her tongue slip xD