That's adorable I love it great story

It would have been better without all the random Japanese thrown in there. It's either in English, or in Japanese. What's the sense in combining them uselessly? Why not just called Vegeta, "Vegeta"? Why not call them Saiyans? Why bother calling Vegeta the prince when you have Nappa randomly calling to him formally in Japanese? It just wouldn't happen.

You also managed to spell some of the Japanese words incorrectly, and use them incorrectly, and while I'm not calling you a weeaboo, I'm simple giving my feedback on how it all pretty much ruins the quality of the story.

I guess I'm just pissed at how every time I got into this fic and really got to enjoying it, boom, more random Japanese. .

Regardless, I enjoyed the bulk of this fic.

So cute !

Désolée, je ne parle pas très bien anglais, mais je veux juste te dire que j'ai adoré ta fic. Merci pour cette fic qui nous offre une vision différente de ces personnages (c'est difficile de trouver des fics sur Nappa et Raditz)

Good luck for your other fics (and sorry for my pitiful english

awe, this story is cute. :)

I just want to say, I'm very disturbed by this story...

A good Nappa story, I haven't read many of those yet... Vegeta's and Raditz's character are very good in the fic too. It's a great fic _

:a gril comes out. she's about a head shorter then radiz,has black hair and eyes,she weres a training gi that red and gold {red for planet vegeta,gold for super-sayien,she also has a tail}

hello. my name is hershy gal. i would like to say

that your work is qouite brillent. if you ever need any work for your shrine with your freind

or just another radiz/nappa fan to talk to. just e-mail me. :bows: goodbye my freinds :gives a classic sayien smirk and leaves:

Aw omg chibi vegeta-san so cute

Thats so cute. I love the way you have Nappa characterized. Eventhough they never show it in DBZ, I still think Nappa really did care for little Veggie chan

yay!

I never thought I could see those three as a family unit, but there it is.

I Really enjoyed it, great job!

AW! How adorable. Chibi Vegeta is the cutest little thing. I love this fic.

that was sooooooooo cute!

chibi vegie head .

Ohh...that is so precious! Poor chibi Veggie-chan_

Oh,that was so cute!Litte Bejiita is jelous!