Reviews for Heat of Love in the Night |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Omg I got the most beautiful package deal. I got yaoi sx and yuri sex in one story Nosebleed everywhere now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wtf wtf wtf wtf wtf wtf wtf dat ending with stalker Akiwa |
![]() ![]() i hate you a lot you idiot! you messed up my brain asshole. You are obligated to put warnings at the start of chapters so this type of thing doesnt happen. Do it or else. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was HOT! Like sexy hawt! ;) PLEASE WRITE MORE! I'm begging ya! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me: -point a gun in Aikawa's direction- Ok, this is very simple, give me your treasure box and you'll live, ok? Aikawa: -hugs the box- NEVER! Me: look! a really hard yaoi scene just behind you! Aikawa: where?! Me: -took the box while she's distracted and fly away- hahaha, fool! Aikawa: hey, get back here with my treasures! -follows me with a knife- |
![]() ![]() ![]() GOD, WHY DOES EVERYONE MAKE M-RATED FANFICS SO FUCKING BODILY EXPLICIT! DX (Freaking out) - HGKDHFGDKJHFKDSHGDKFGHKDFGHK DFHGKFDLJG But still good |
![]() ![]() ![]() In the sentences, 'How much longer before I lose my insanity?' and 'When you lose your insanity, Misaki, I'll bring you back with me.', I think it would make more sense to change 'insanity' to 'sanity'. Otherwise you're saying Misaki is going to lose his craziness. Still, a very good fic! :D I had trouble believing this was your first one. And the ending was brilliant ;3 |
![]() ![]() ...I want to see Aikawa's treasure box OuO |
![]() ![]() OMFG Sooooo Fricken turned on |
![]() ![]() ![]() My reaction: O.o My brother's reaction: *drool* |
![]() ![]() holy shet oh my god i love you! so good xDDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your story! It's so passionate! Yummmm Oh and the last bit made me laugh so hard XD I can sooo imagine Aikawa doing that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really good, it was weird though you don't click on Yaoi and expect Yuri but some odd reason I preferred it, okay I have but one request continue with the Aikawa and Ari story, it was really good and stories with Aikawa as a main are few and far between. So if you could that would be epic. Lots of cookies, MissUzuki |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohhh, your story made my nose bleed soo many times! XD Lawl-Excellent descriptions (btw)! ;D 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() AIKAWA-SAAAAAAAN! GIVE ME YOUR TREASURES! xD |