| Reviews for Harry Potter Book 1: The Forbidden Corridor |
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   keckkorey chapter 29 . 6/18/2016 love this need more |
| jchangpa chapter 8 . 7/23/2015 Well as any Draco is a good friend story, it is bad to the bone. |
| Mmars69 chapter 30 . 5/2/2015 Thank you. I love your story and encourage you to keep writing. Having said that, you might consider a Beta to help you perfect an already great story. |
| LabyrinthChild05 chapter 29 . 12/18/2013 I have a supercalifregalisticexpialidoshous feeling that Draco and Harry are Half Brothers because 1) madam pomphry asked about Cissy and 2) Draco said he wanted to be in Griffindor like. His real Dad. I am betting 50 Gallions that they are brothers. |
| afan chapter 29 . 5/28/2013 Up to this point, it has been an easy and mostly pleasant read. Your above average language skills have contributed greatly to make it happen. I would rate your language skills at an eight out of ten and your originality at a three out of ten. Keep in mind that while as a critic I have a feeling about what is good and what isn't, I have no ability to write like you do. To me your are a narrative god/goddess. |
| smkennedy007 chapter 29 . 5/13/2013 Please keep going! I like this take on the hp series! I would really like to read more please! |
| Man of Constant Sorrow chapter 18 . 5/7/2013 Nicely done. "Kings to you Harry" she said. Harry smiled and said "I'll catch you later" before leaving for the common room. Luna looked at her surrounded king and flicked it. A very nice reference to the Count of Monte Cristo movie, one of my favorites. |
| lightskiller chapter 29 . 3/20/2013 interesting |
| pawsrule chapter 29 . 2/23/2013 Thanks for the update! I hope the girl in the in the mirror with Harry isn't Ginny, the only reason I think that is that Harry thought they resembled his parents. Look forward to more. |
| Renaissancebooklover108 chapter 26 . 2/10/2013 snape shouldn't get killed...for now... LOL |
| TsukiyoTenshi chapter 24 . 12/31/2012 The chapter did give some insight into Harry's personality, though it was little...bittersweet? I think could be the word I'm thinking of... UPDATE WHENEVER! |
| Renaissancebooklover108 chapter 24 . 12/31/2012 i like this Harry a lot, i always thought he was a bit too stupid for the magnanity (that's not the right word or spelling but something related to magnanimous... you know what forget how about ENORMITY...no IMPORTANCE) of his character, i guess Rowling may have wanted to give Hermione ALL the brains but i've really never believed Harry could be that dumb or immature. just my opinion, feel free to disagree, but i like this one a lot! |
| demilovato4eva chapter 23 . 12/29/2012 Really love your story update soon please |
| Renaissancebooklover108 chapter 22 . 12/19/2012 i love how this was updated on 12/12/12 LOL |
| firebolthallow1572 chapter 21 . 11/7/2012 I hope you not to long with next few chapter you caught my attention now I need to wait for to come with the rest of the book 1 |
