Awesome story :)

Great story!

Every time I reread this story I love it more and more. It was very well done. I wouldn't worry about too many mistakes. If we had to make everything exact to the show there would be no fan fics written. :D

Ok just read your story. At first I really didn't like it because of the lyrics. I thought "that's not like Tim". But then I went "oh wait; it's fanDOM. Duh." All in all, it was a great story (despite the dark tone.) Sadly I can relate to the story and parts of the song.

Nice job! A few new layers to Timmy! Keep writing and don't let the critics get to you!

I think you are as brave as Tim for writing and you do NOT need to put yourself down so we will read, ok?

This is R A W! This is a great setup!

Did you really put an a/n during the story? That's a #1 NO, NO!

Second, why all the a/n's period? Do you want your story read or your BLOGS? There are sites for blogs. Just write the story. You're not a bad writer. Stop messing it up!

Is it weird that I can imagine cGee that way as a sixteen year old?

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Hi This is the first time I have read your story, so I don't know about waiting for updates but the story I have read is soooooooooooooooo good, I think you captured the personallity of the team really well, just so you know I am a huge Tim fan, please keep writing, thanks.

Rough. i know too many kids having to deal with that stuff. There isn't any help out there.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story from beginning to end. Thank you so much for writing it.

Absolutely loved this whole story...I hope one day you will so a sequel and BTW each and every chapter was well worth the wait. :)

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