I have been searching a very long time for "believable" Teslen did, that I could picture and not find holes. This is perfect, the characterisation is beautiful and the emotional turmoil through both of them perfectly rendered. I can never see Helen and Nikola, together forever and eternally happy, but I can never see them apart either. This was perfect. Thank you. xx

Holy Crap Monkeys! (ya I know that sounded weird get over it ;) ) u had me crying at some of the angsty parts (it takes quite a bit of heart ache to make me cry but darn it its nikola we are talking about here!) and then laughing and clapping at the end! please don't ever stop writing!

Aww, I loved it. :)

Awwwwweewwwwwwe 3

It somewhat frightens me that I like this chapter... but like it I did nonetheless. :)

Hey, when I start reading a story, I stick it out. Or at least do my best to do so. Very nice read. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm loving it, please please update!

I love this, and not just for the smut that's coming next. You let them deal with their relationship. All the angst needs to be there. He needs her to admit she loves him. She needs to admit to herself and to him that she loves him. And then the fun times can begin.

Also, it's cute how they each have to save the other one from putting on a show for the security cameras. :)

ooooh I want more nooooow :) Love all the fluffiness!

Ahem. Yow and Za! This was a very good pick me up in a morning that seems to be working against me. Loved it, I can't wait for more!

Gah. That was all the sweetness and all the smexy and more soooon? *begs pitifully, bribes with completed chapter*

Awwwwwwwwww! That ending? My heart melted for Nikola when Helen said she loved him! Mooooooooooore;-)

Need.. next... chapter... please?!

That was so lovely - and she finally admitted it him. Have to say though I grin at the part where he chastised her for not using her words.

More. Now. :D :D :D