This looks good.

One q though: Why would Cloud forget about his kid with Tifa, but not his kid from his first marriage (which he doesnt like talking about) Unless I missed something and Xion is not his?

I like this it has conspiricy, characters i already know, and my favorite a character who's been "hardened" by a bad expirence

Not much to go on but looks promising

Actually pretty interested at this point...
Keep writing.

-Taylor Tonks

AMAZING!always AMAZING!

AMAZING!This is exactly like a story I meant to type up like...a year or 2 ago XD minus Vanitas,I had the bro guy as Riku in my head XD I dont HATE riku...dont love him either.I blame The World That Never dark sheild is just like,"Dude...I JUST got hit and NOW you defend me!Bastard..." I seriously was screamig it when my parents weren't home :P but anyway,i LOVE this.I have goth Sora in my stories though XD its goes through my head,"I want him like me.I want people to know not all goths are bad people.I want them to know that not all goths are saintist or aithiests or can be strong christians."

and I tend to hurt sora...alot...i put my emotions into his pain,joy,sadness,love,ect.