Thank you so much for this wonderful trip down memory lane and a very much needed re-visit to the Goblin City! :D Your depictions of these adorably mischievous characters are perfect. I sure laughed at the everyday mayhem they have created for their monarch.

Also, this chapter was heavy with feels and adjustment! Sarah is caught up on a firestorm and she's barely seeing through the smoke. And Jareth is burning up too, although I suspect he will acknowledge the reason why sooner rather Sarah, stubborn smug trickster as he is. The power of love-lust will scorch everyone and everything!

Another amazing update! I've loved this story to death but for me it'll be the last as I'm tokophobic, a fear of pregnancy, that is very debilitating. I've loved the story up to here though so I thank you so much for your amazing writing! I've loved every single chapter, every character, and the amazing world building you've made. I'd love to see you working on the new Labyrinth movie honestly, I know you'd do great

what a wonderful chapter, thank you for continuing to share this story with us!
as always I hope everything is well with you and patiently await the next update ️

I KNEW IT! Aaaaaaah I’m so excited to see what happens next!

Come across this story not long ago and I honestly haven't been able to stop reading since! The whole thing has been so gripping - you are a very talented writer! Looking forward to the next installment.

Ha. I knew she was with child. I had half expected her to have got it on with Roldon in this chapter lol. At least I was right about one thing!

Cockblocking/blueballing Jareth was the best bit about this entire chapter. Well played.

Thank you for the update. Loved it.

I- I-... I have no words for that "Fuck you" of a cliffhanger, but Oh. My. God. At the beginning of the chapter, when there was the talk of Davion (allegedly) being a pedophile, and him defending himself otherwise, I swear, you have no idea how much I wanted him to just be like, "hmm, you'd know alot about pedophilia, wouldn't you, Jareth" or something.
I. Would. Die. Happy. If you could/would Incert that SOMEWHERE later in the story... PLEASE(!)
Anyways, great chapter as always, I've eaten my nails, fingers and forearm, waiting for the second part of this chapter...

Ha! I KNEW IT! Oh, why did you leave it there? I can’t wait to find out how this happened or what Jareth’s reaction is going to be.

Jak Jareth mógł nie domyślić się, ciekawa jestem jego reakcji. Co z R. , czyżby zatracał się w nieosiągalnej a przegapiał M. kobietę w zasięgu ręki. Intensywność związku jest dla mnie całym niebem. Już tęsknię do kontynuacji

This was sooooo good! As usual! I seriously feel like I’m reading an amazing novel no a fanfic! This story is just so incredibly! Amazing job!

I have no words that can describe my awe at your world building skills. It's amazing and why I tell everyone this is my fave story ever. I am always just enraptured by the culture and characters you create. I loved the history and religions so much. But damnit...the ending of this chapter made me gasped and scream nooooo. Not because I didn't like it but because I need more and you just gave us sooooo much. And now my poor husband will have to deal with me. P.S. remind me to tell you about how because of this story my whole family knows I write smutty fanfic now. I was outed tonight. lol.

Omg I knew it! How dare you leave us here haha! Ahh I can’t wait for the next one!

I knew it from the title of the chapter. First word I searched for started with a P. And I was right.

SO GLAD TO SEE THIS STORY RETURN! Seriously, I can't thank you enough for moving forward with what has been my absolute favorite fanfic experience ever! You are an incredibly talented writer. Your depth of character deveolpment is amazing and the intricacies of the Underground world you have created is on level with the likes of Martin & Tolkein (but easier to read!) Bravo! Can't wait to see what comes next!

The GROWTH! This chapter was incredible—my words just don’t do it justice. Wonderful work ️