500 Galleons, not G500
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Pomfrey, not Pomphrey

"I disillusioned myself"

(Harry already knows the disillusionment charm, so one of these sentences needs to be changed, maybe change the first to him using his cloak?)

"Today we are going to learn the disillusionment charm"

kidnaped - kidnapped

Please actually write a H/Hr sequel. There's enough pieces in this story showing that it could work. Hermione is fairly obviously not a lesbian in this story, but bisexual, despite what she's professing.

The sequel "Chattel" left me quite disappointed. Though I liked the mention that Harry might come back and conquer Magical Britain. With Hermione's help of course. :-)

It would have been better if it wasn't keeping the same tone all the time. You get tired and want for a tempo change by the end of the first chapter but it just goes on and on and on in exactly the same way.

I liked everything except headquarters. It had muggle repellant wards before, so why didn't it later?

Though I enjoyed the story, that was a bit of a wimpy ending.

Have that been taken over by robots? Because the way they talk - they gotta be robots

lol that last one.
Great story. Thanks.

I found this very enjoyable. Two thumbs up! Thank you for a well written story.

This was a good read! Thank you for all the time and effort you put into writing it. I really enjoyed it.

This was a fun story to read, thanks for writing and sharing it with us :)

I want to see more bashing and low Harry getting his revenge!

I really hope to see a sequel to this at some point, you might not consider it a H/Hr ship, but to me it's well on the way towards that, something I would love to see explored more in a sequel.
Along with giving the Wizarding world a well deserved ass kicking in some form :-)