Can't wait for it! You have a beautiful style writing. Hope you find your cartridge soon, that or buy a new one... Anyways, I'll be following.

Leonard.

Man, Chikorita's a hard pokemon to think of as a boy. . . And so are the evolutions, come to think of it. . .

Alex was nice enough to let him live, but. . . white t-shirt? I can't make myself imagine that. Damn you, lack of creativity.

Oh, this looks interesting. Looking forward to seeing what the two get. (I'm kind-of-but-not-really hoping one of them gets Chikorita, because that little fella is really hard to raise... I've never used one in game, I prefer Feraligatr and Typhlosion by a long shot).

I'll be following along :)

So awesome! Can't wait to see what happens next Update soon :)

God, now I'm dying to know if she'll get shot or something.

Such a short chapter... ah, well, welcome back!

hurry up with next chapter

Yay! New Story! Hope You Update Quickly! Why Am I Writing With Capitols? I Dunno! I've Read Your Other Story And It Was Awesome!

I just finished your previous story, Locke and Key, and when I saw this, I almost squealed in joy. I'm really looking forward to this!

I'm looking forward to see how this develops. I love that you're writing with the girl character. :)

yes :D another nuzlocke! im really surprise you would use the original johto rather than the one lyra is in, but its hard to find a story that is about kris and not lyra so im really happy :)

Holy crap, you're back. This is going to be amazing.

Very mysterious and well executed and it leaves me wanting to know more. It's definitely not your typical nuzlocke beginning, which I can appreciate. Expect me to keep reading and reviewing.
Keep writing,
Alfie

Such an ambiguous beginning... which makes it an awesome cliffy.