You know, this is FUN! I can see exactly what Willow was saying by "you can be the subject complement to my intensive verb group any day, baby"- I don't speak with the last of those words in a sentence to anyone except a baby (newborn to 2 years old), but she would!
I see exactly what she meant, she was saying "I'll do something to you any day", that's IFF I got it right- I might not have.
I like this story- really.
I must agree with what you have Buffy saying; Willow's vampire Doppelganger (what I call her evil twin sister), was a vicious woman, she tried to violate Willow- she threatened to rape her sister- remember: "if you don't want to play, I guess I can't force you, Oh, wait... I can!" (the play she was talking about would have been incestous- she's an evil girl!- in Middle English; an Euel Fern).- any girl who threatens to rape her sister is an evil girl.
She fell into lust for her- no wonder they fought- but that's another story, I was reminded of by a statement (a fine statement) here, regarding an episode- and that would have helped to form Willow's personality; she wanted to fight against evil- well, her vampiric sister was definitely evil!
Please continue your spectacular stories!- it was a pleasure fueling your ideas (you left me with that impression, when you said that you like it when people comment), I hope I was kind in this statement!
Your fan:
Cotto.

Her voice dropped to a lower huskier note. "Talk nerdy to me, Will."

Comma needed.

I see no other mistakes, so.

Is good fic. Willow is hawt.

And Hermione deserves that last line.

REVIEW COMPLETE

I love this one. Gave me a good laugh :D
Good job!

"You can be the subject complement to my intensive verb group any day, baby."

You could just about make a meme out of that.

Hahahahahaha... What the hell? I love it.

I love your sense of humor, and your interpretations of the characters. This whole story makes me very, very happy.

Funny, I like it. How did you come up with Willow's last line anyway?

Haha will admit it was very cute , I don't ship B/W much anymore (shifted to B/T...jokes on me given how nobody ships them haha) but every few months I get that old B/W itch and sweet one shots like this are always nice.

This is awesome! Why don't one-shots like this get the reviews they deserve?

Awe! Super cute! Very fun and entertaining read! Thanks for sharing!