je l'ai adorée mais je préfère qu'il ait une suite

I think Yeon's being in love with Viole at this moment )) Anyway, this story is so good! Can I have your story to translate it into Vietnamese?

Bam's harem is high quality

Could you possibly make it longer and yeon watches/listens while he askes Rachel why she betrayed him and yeon eventually finds out the whole story?

#f*ckRachel

PFT,
"He wouldn't act so cool around a Princess of Zahard, or even one with one of the 13 Months Weapons would he? No, he definitely couldn't"

PFFFFFT.
Also, as a ToG Fanfic (Newbie) Writer, I must say that this is an awesome Fanfic! (I've only re read ToG like, four times now... I think I have a problem...)

Naruto-who?

Darn it Viole. Rachel doesn't deserve that much devotion!
Still, it's nice to see Yeon getting to know Viole. And perhaps admit that he's not a completely bad guy.

up bro i like it ... boss

we need more fic like this.

I thought it was a great chapter because it left it open for continuation. Though as it would stand from this chapter, it wouldn't be much different from canon yet other than having Yeon actively seeking Viole. However I'm with you and prefer him getting with Androssi.

But since I'm reviewing here's a question from what understand from reading only manwha and not studying Korean? I guess itd be, wasn't ssi a form of honorific meaning something. Basically I wondered if why the name wasn't Andro-ssi meaning her name was actually Andro if no honorifics were attached. Prefer Androssi but making that notice.

great

Short but still good. You made a decent characterization of both of them and it was well written. But still very short...

enjoyed it

Awwww... i feel fluffy all of a sudden... but no!... i do not ship baamxyeon... nice story though.