Yep, another perfect story... :D

~Bree

I like this! I know it's old, but it's really good! Loki and Cap's discussion at the end was priceless ;)

This is awesome. Loki is spot-on! :)

Woah, that was good! And I absolutely loved the Cap/Loki confrontation!

Great story :D

Very well written and a pleasure to read.

Maybe some day they will.

Loki just doesn't get it, does he?

But you managed to add just enough Steve angst from Loki's point of view, and you did a great job of it. Hope to read more from you soon!

Definitely one of the most in-character Loki based fictions I've read so far. I'd love to read more of your work. :-)

Ok so this is pretty much the best thing ever. I loved all of it and those last few paragraphs were great! I really liked Loki and Cap talking, I like seeing character interactions between those two. Great job! :)

I frigging LOVE you! (Or, since I don't know you, I came to love your writing and very much appreciate your talent!)
This made my day and I'll add it to my favorite because it's hard to find good fanfiction where the characters aren't only mindlessly screwing each other through the mattress-sorry but I can't think of a polite way to phrase that right now. I' off to bed now,keep up the good work!

This was simply amazing! Lovely characterizations and insights on the characters on what might have happened after the movie. Loki was wonderfully written here and his interactions with Steve was chilling and brilliant. I just love the ending here.

/Watching the three humans, I suddenly realize my greatest mistake, the root of my defeat. I had accused Fury of being desperate to bring them together, these humans so haunted by their own failures and darkest secrets. I had not been wrong when I had called the Avengers lost creatures. They had not found themselves in the battle; they are still as lost in their own lives as they were before my invasion. I have wounded them, each and every one of them, and they are fragile, and more vulnerable than ever.

My mistake was allowing them to find each other./

Just amazing. Great job on this!

Wonderful and somewhat bittersweet in the fact that, yes, Loki did play a large role in their more cohesive existence.
Great stuff mate
Cheers

Good work on this! I loved seeing the end from Loki's POV. Just one thing, I'd think that a Norse god would know what a reindeer is, although Tony's reference to Reindeer Games probably wouldn't make sense.

This is amazing! Awesome, awesome Loki POV. And the way you write Steve? Love it LIKE BURNING. 3