Oh my, this is such a cute story!
I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work! ;)

Schisalda

2 year old ish in a good way

"YOU ARE THE CUTEST COUPLE EVER!" A random shout came out, from a group of teen girls, along with a ring of giggles. Soul grinned, quickly scooped Maka up bridal style and yelled,

"Because I have THE cutest girl EVER!" And spun, while they laughed. He set her down and as her feet touched the carpet, she looked up, and kissed his cheek. Laughing, they returned to their booth and paid the bill, and began to walk outside into the brisk air.

this part was when i loled the most btw

you should of made this longer

So adorable! Plz contiue!

You gotta fix some of your punctuations and spelling. Do't get carried away by the awesomeness of thw story :D Also... Do you happen to watch PPG by any chance? Good job anyway, though.:)

That was a really cute SoMa and I loved it . Well Done.

MysteryLlama

This was soooooooooo fluffy, i love it. I have had a hard time imagining Soul and Maka being so lovey-dovey to each other before this, but this story was adorable and it made me imagine how romantic both of them could be! My heart and my face melted at the same time that I rolled out of the universe. (Translation: It was just so cute!)

i love it! SO CUTE! AND THE GIRLS GOING AWWWWWW was a nice touvh!;)

can you make another story for this part i love how there first date went but i wanna know if soul is going to say 'I LOVE You' back

IT WAS AWESOME! U must right more. You rely cought the mood and i love panic at the disco! U should right a whole book! :D

Cute

Can't wait for more! :)