The legend begin... seems like it also ended here since there has not been any update for 5 years..

Thank you. Thank you so much. I am at the point where naruto ends the fight with zabuza. Its so nice to see another point of view of the story and so far i love you point of view very very much! I always hated the fact that so many bad people in naruto lived but Zabuza and Haku had to die. It was beautiful written story and geniusly made but still i am mad they had to. Thanks for the different kind of view :)
As well i have to thank you for an Naruto i can much more identify with. I too always thought that one must realize something as big as Kuruma in ones body earlier. You just have to notice these things. Even with the best sealing Jutsu there is Naruto should have realized that way sooner and he should have talked to Kuruma way sooner. His personality demands that tbh.

HA! Love that last part!

Fucking awesome update soon

even after your improvements, i still feel the dialogue between pre-academy naruto and kurama is a tad unrealistic on kurama's part I felt naruto's commanding tone with each "request" he made of the kyuubi's help was slightly impudent, and it didnt help that the Kyuubi seemed a little too eager to comply. Im fully behind a camaraderie of sorts but it would have been more convincing for there to be a better progression in their relationship., also the kyuubi;s motivations for waiting on naruto hand and foot arent really explored beyond the deal of his freedom in exchange for his assistance in naruto's journey to hokage which is an inconvenience he could have avoided by crushing naruto when he entered his mindscape to approach the tetragramme cage.

that however, is only a very minor nitpick that didnt detract at all from the enjoyment i had reading ur fic;it took a vast amount of digging to find a fic that is kyuubi-centric and also well written, well written enough in fact to compete with rathanel's Empty Cage. also i liked how you ended the eleventh chapter by making the first reference to the title's "blond demon". Ending beautifully on that note also made the abrupt finish midway a heavy plot buildup between akatsuki and naruto a little palpable.

OF COURSE, THAT DOESNT MEAN YOU SHOULDNT COME BACK AND WRITE MORE XD

It's a shame there's no more, but it ended on a good, humorous note.

your danzo is interesting. hes usually written as an incredibly evil man, here he seems more level headed and want to protect konoha at all costs from the dark

Pussy naruto

This is amazing.

I know that I am a little late to the game, however, if for some reason you see this then just read what I have to say.

This story and idea are well developed. Your writing style is easy to read and appeasing to the mind and eye. I had only one problem. When I started to write my beta told me to look at my character(s) and his/her/their age and see if what they said would actually be something someone on their level could say. Your Naruto is four years old and speaking like a teenager. I love what he says. His dialogue is beautiful, but I cannot imagine someone so you speaking in that manner. I also understand that it is relevant to your story. He needs to act older beyond his years in order for the story to progress. Just keep it in mind for future stories if you are still writing.

I love the way you introduced Ayame and Teuchi... I also appreciate the diverse background story. Many people put him in the orphanage, but I like the whole foster family idea, it adds to his struggles, and I absolutely love angst.

Keep writing, keep publishing, keep inspiring

when the next chapter im inove with this

Oh god naruto still thinks a sorry will solve everything. He apologizes whenever he really fucks up and that that. He isnt court martialed. He isnt even given a slip on the wrist. Just fuck upand with a 'opps sorry' all is forgiven. Kinda happy tosee him kidnapped maybe finally he will stopbeing so brash and think before he does stupid shit.

Love that u didnt make naruto into a fool who oved something that hates him in return. His progress is interesting. Suprised he didnt scavange 44 training grounds of sell/keep some of the beast he killed

Fighting back and bowing are to extreams. The fox wasnt even suggestion fighting he wanted to know why you automatic2 bow when ur not in the wrong. Please dont set naruto up to be a willing door mat. He can ignore them instead of apologozing for things he didnt do.

super