One piece is the best anime you can ever imagine

I am rejoicing that this bullshit is over! That was not one piece.u made sanji act homosexual even though he's going out with vivi and btw the do not match. What does Blackbeard have to do with any of this! Luffy will never do such things! That is the worst story ever I can hear the angels singing that it is over. When i saw the description I thought it was going to be really long but u have proved me so darn right wrong. I've read one chapter story's and they bearly had any words on it and they were way better that this. Honestly I could go on forever but I will not please don't ever write something this horrendous again.

Why the hell would vivi call luffy baby she's going out with sanji and luffy does not and will never play with a girls feelings

well this sucks

School is over now so get back to work and im a luffyxhancock fan so try to throw on something for them while nami kidnaped

Dude luffy's father is Monkey D. Dragon not Shanks
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awww i am pissing myself laughing at what luffy said to zoro and i chocked on the icecream that i was eating when nami said she dated smoker i mean i know that their age is changed now but still in the show hes like 40.

ahhhh the suspence is killing me! great story im loving it

good luck with your grades and your school..hope when you back you will continue write this story with interesting content.

Emmm...i'm not sure if this story stupid,but im being honest here..this story make me lost interest reading title and summary is good,but the more chapter i read it,its more i don't know like i cant feel anything.a good story ,doesn't matter its fanfiction or original,when a reader read it,they can feel it,have fun read it and when the story finish they will come again and re-read it and favorite it.

And don't start saying 'i write straight from my heart/brain'...because that only show that something wrong with your heart if you say you write a ff just for fun and don't really care what reader think,don't publish it online then,keep on write on your note book or journal.
i like your summary,but not your story..for me it's messed attention more about luffy/nami your plot having nami vs hancock over luffy stick with need for you to make it more complicated by having some ..occ character is okey,but luffy crying too not cool ooc!

Emm...

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PHOO!
I saw in my inbox there was a new chapter and I get here and it's an author's note. :( Bit disappointed, but at least I'm aware that you're not dead. -_- Please update soon.

The first chapter is really good!

the gods are real sounds cool and so does boyfriend you keep spelling sure wrong there's no h in there but awesome story so far.