merci!

Après avoir lu la traduction en français, je continue en anglais avec le traducteur...

Loved it!

Lmaoooo! "And what were you going to use, hairspray?

I don't think I've ever read this part of the story, well the alternative story. I like it so far. I wonder what the doctor was trying to accomplish?

I wonder if there was a slight chance that Caius could've accidentally bit her neck; I kinda think there was since all vampires could lose control if the circumstances were right... or wrong for that matter. More importantly, if Jasper was fully aware of the risk, even if slight. BC unless he was 100% sure, that there were no chance Caius would bite, than the promise to never let anything happen to her, ever, would be broken.
Ive read this story at least twice before, but I forgot if whether he addressed that info or not.

Love crazy. Love this fic. One if my most fave Has/Bella fics, if not my fave.

Well. I think I rather liked that version of the story better. They both ended kind of suddenly, which would be my biggest criticism, but more of the first version than this one.
I liked this better, despite the lack of Crazy, who I did love, largely because Bella was, as Jasper said, scrappy and independent and because in the first one I fully felt her sense of betrayal when he held her down and drank from her in the middle of supposedly making love, and it felt like that got resolved, or pushed to the side, too quickly. Yes, he agreed not to feed on her without permission, but I wanted to see him get it. Really get it. Which I didn’t feel he did.

Also, the Charlie aspect was so tragic in the first one, and the revenge against ‘mrs’ newton in this one was kinda sweet. Although also tragic, as it came at the expense of Mike’s sanity.

If it was a tragedy, her insistence on getting revenge personally and without help would have been her tragic flaw. Let’s face it, if Jasper hadn’t intervened she would have been highly unlikely to survive!

And, given that Jasper too would then have died (which apparently she knew, although it wasn’t clear when she became aware of that), which makes it seem pretty selfish.

So, that was frustrating, but thank goodness not fatal.

All that said, obviously I enjoyed these a lot (I assume it’s obvious based on my reading them at every opportunity over the past two or three days!). I’m
not truly much of a one for dark stories (I like your Halloween specials because they are short and fun, but not serious), which is why I put off reading this for so long. But I’m glad I finally got to it! Thanks for sharing it.

Are you still writing?

Ha! I wondered if that would happen. If he really was the one who sold her (them).

Why matches and not a lighter? That seems too time consuming. Plus, you need two hands to light them. I am feeling tense!

I guess you abandoned your blog, hey? Which is the way most blogs go...

Alright, just one more chapter and then I have to get dressed!

Foiled by humans!

So, I'm presuming that in this version Jasper has figured out a bit more quickly that she is his mate?

Okay, so it really is an emetic. Hmm...