A magical private invesrigator in chicago, named Harry, hmmm i wonder who that reminds me of!

I wanted to thank you for all your hard work and for sharing. While the storyline wasn’t always my favorite, It’s at least something that combines two fandoms I’ve been into lately that are a bit harder to find crossovers for that isn’t so poorly written as to be unreadable (fanfiction can be the wild west when it comes to spelling, grammar and story development). Also, I wanted to say how disgusting I thought some of the reviewers were. No matter how you feel about a story name calling is unacceptable. I’m sure it can be discouraging when people are downright nasty. Try not to let the haters get you down. If you enjoy writing then don’t let their negativity keep you from it.

Sanskrit is most assuredly not the “first language” it is a product of Indo-Aryan which comes from Indo-European.

Or you could have used beseeching. That's probably what you did - combined imploring and beseeching and got impeaching.

Imploring them to open the window, not impeaching. Impeaching means to call the validity of something into question or to charge someone with treason or misconduct. That's not what the owl was doing. You need to look these words up in a dictionary before you use them.

I can't help wondering why harry doesn't use muggle hair dyes to put some grey in his hair or use stick on beards and moustaches to help with looking older. And since when are glamour spells hard to support? I think you're making his immortality as hard to bear as his normal life has been so far. Give the guy a break!

I don't understand this Harry of yours. He doesn't know transfiguration, he can barely do Glamors but he got into the Aurors and his primary battle spell is Sectumsempra a dark spell which I'll bet he never learned the counter to.

Giving up on this !IdiotHarry story.

Great story. I really liked your Death and the quiting being Master of Death. Clever. Thanks.

In a previous review, I stated that the horsemen twist made this story no longer my kind of story. I stand corrected. Very well done indeed!

I was absolutely with you this story... right up until it became a horsemen story. This new direction just seems to take something special away from the story. Don't get me wrong, it's still really well done, just different from the types of stories I usually like to rear.

I liked the story till you spouted about Sanskrit being the first language.

just drop it if you need to follow canon with just your shitty different pov

If this Harry is gonna be abitch and not be able to talk for himself or actually stand up to Shield then this is just gonna be a huge disappointment

eh. while i have a sneaking suspicion it's based off discworld (never actually read it), honestly, the only personifications of death other than Marvel's and the Endless coming to mind at the moment is the grim reaper from Bill & Ted, heh.

I literally read till the end and while I was reading your author's note, realised that the story had ended. And you have no idea how sad I felt. I mean, I really liked this story.