Wow. Wonderfully well written! Both technically - proper grammer and spelling, something that's too often lacking online, and in terms of characterization - Joe sounds very authentic. Kudos!

Whew- good story. I like reading all about your little "Easter Eggs" at the end. . . and you write Joe very well. My only quibble is that, were I you, I would put my story in chapters: that makes it easier to navagate and also makes it easier for people who can't read it in one peice to return later to where they left off.

This story is amazing. It has to be the best story I have read in agaes. I loved the way Joe stuck to his character and hoe those girls were so prude. It was absolutely wonderful!

Keep writting!

Magdely

I loved this fic! I hope you'll write more about Joe. He was my favorite character in A.I.

What talent! It has got to be one of the best(if not THE best) fan fic I have ever read! :) Excellent job! The characters were very real, and very believable. I mean, what more could you want? There's action, there's romance, not to mention hilarious comedy. I just saw A.I. not very long ago, and it captured my imagination(my friends think I'm nuts-but that's okay) I was just searching for some fan fiction of A.I and I've found it! Your comedy was wonderful-I really laughed outloud many times-especially with the "bless me, Father, I've done it again!" and "Oh joy oh bliss, oh freedom!" heh heh...Really great job-keep writing. You have a gift, and never lose it! :) -Ista

Now that was really cute. Great job - I really loved reading it. :)

What a good read. You have a very good style of

writing that keeps the interest of the reader. Keep on writing !

Matrix, damn it, you're outdoing me here! Brilliant writing on Joe, and your "Literary Easter Eggs" are fast becoming a favorite of mine. And thank you, as always, for the dedication - (insert blushing emoticon here) - so very kind of you!