I was happy people were killed. To often in these stories I find there are never any consequences for people like the malfoys, the dursleys, Dumbledore or whoever else help him mess with Harry’s life. So I hope we get lots of that. I also hope he doesn’t attend hog warts that just makes him loose his independence. Anyway I love Harry and saber together. More chapters please.

Please more Story and KICK ASS and please continue this story please is so going to be action and love of Harry and Arturia!

My problem with this story was Tom. Him suddenly doing a ritual that would grant him that much power and raise his threat so much yet during his entire life he didn't before? There wasn't nearly a good enough explanation on that to feel at all satisfying.

Following that is how it seems people don't monitor places like Stone Henge despite it being of some important and power. Not even the Clocktower or DoM?

Finally is Harry's childhood and all that happened feels highly neglected. As in the explanations for it all, to show how he has become what he has which is HP in looks only. It might as well be a OC but because of that it lowers how much I care about that particular character.

In the end the biggest problem is so many important things being glossed over. Hopefully that will be fixed in the future but as of chapter 9 this clearly isn't the case.

Aside from a few moments of poor grammer, this was a ver ver very good crossover. Toobad you did not finish it, its definately worth continueing though.

great chapter! poor harry he is pretty damaged isnt he

Awesome chapter!
Just loved it!

So the Grail System is malfunctioning somehow and is in a constant state of "on" and Harry & Saber have been fighting to stop the world ending almost non-stop for the last 10 years?
Thats GOT to suck.

Is there no way for them to attack the system itself and finally destroy it for good? Have they tried? What are the mages doing about this since by now they HAVE to have noticed?

One line of an Aria should be just a boost, it should take 2 or 3 lines to do more than that, and it SHOULD take the full Aria to actualize & internalize a Reality Marbel since it would normally also take the same number of lines to deploy it normally.

Yeah, I'm not very happy with what happened to Hermione. Then again this story has a rather very broken Harry, so why not should everyone else be broke too?

Interesting tale.

Well the knights should probably get some kind of synergy bonus together.

hey cool story. keep up the good work.

Putting aside the fact that you're having multiple servants in the same category being summoned over the course of days, which really isn't how the Holy Grail War works since the energy required for that many heroic spirits to be summoned would be astronomical. For the sake of argument let's say that the taint from Angra Mainyu really screwed up the foundation of the ritual so I'll suspend my disbelief with that.

There are several things that make absolutely no sense to me after reading the first 6 chapters.

First of all, how would anyone know that the grail was tainted? The Einzberns aren't going to admit to the fact that they attempted to summon a demon to win the war. The only reason anyone ever found out about the fact that the grail was tainted was because Kirei and Kiritsugu witnessed it in Fate/Zero. Kiritsugu never told anyone about that so the only reason Saber and co. even found out was because Kirei/Gilgamesh wanted them to know.

Second is the matter of Harry's distortion, skills, and reality marble. In F/SN, Shirou wound up distorted after surviving a fire that killed everyone around him when he accepted that he was going to die. An event of that magnitude led to him wanting to save others even at great risk to himself. I don't really see a parallel with Harry's case. Yes he was mistreated, but how does that lead to him having zero value for other people's lives? And he's 14 at the time of GoF, which makes it really unbelievable that he could become so powerful and develop a super ultra complicated technique even if he had Rin as a teacher. Reality Marbles take many years of research to create and the only reason Shirou was able to use his so early was because he cheated by witnessing Archer use it and then using Rin's prana in UBW and he had Archer's arm grafted on in HF.

Lastly, the fact that their plan is to just kill off all the servants to prevent the Holy Grail from being filledAngra Mainyu from being born is just incomprehensible. Harry and Saber aren't immortal so they can't exactly go on their murdering spree for the sake of humanity forever. What do they intend to do? Kill off every single magical person that contracts and destroy every magical artifact ever so that nobody can get command seals? I could accept that as a viable plan (aside from the fact that there's no way in hell they could fight off True Ancestors) if they were dumb protagonists who had no way of planning anything out, but they have Rin on their side. Not only is she a genius and a prodigy, but she's part of one of the 3 founding families, so she would know how to dismantle the grail. On top of that, she's Zelretch's student so she'd be able to ask him for help. It's not like dismantling the Greater Grail is unheard of, seeing as that's what Kiritsugu and Irisviel did in Fate/Kaleid Liner. I don't think they even destroyed it either, they just disabled it I believe.

Sorry if it seems like I'm bashing or flaming you. I really just don't understand your characterization and plot for the story.

This story is awesome! Thanks for all the effort that you've put into it.

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

This is just great keep it up