if you can't end it then don't end it! I wana read about Oga family life with Hilda lok

For the iiiiiiiiiiiiiinfinite triiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiillionth time dis story is infiiiiiiiiiiiinite% da bst of BEELZEBUB.[[ARIGATOO CHAN]].

It wasn't necessary to make aoi and oga arc
Off is better with Hilda I just hate Aoi
She pisses me off that fucking nasty bitch

The story is ok I guess but I had to stop at chapter 6. Cause was the grammatical fiasco in every chapter. Improvements are really needed, otherwise I wouldn't call this more than a prototype of a fanfiction or further, recommend this to anyone (sorry for being so harsh).

The grammer can be improved, but the story is great. It's hard to find good Beelzebub fanfiction, so although the grammer is not amazing it's worth reading.

Awwwwwwwwwwww... I totally loveeeeeeeee ur story..! This is too super duper cutest sweet.. hope, I can read more Tatsuhelda story from you, dear.. :)

Amazing lo end it spend a whole nighter on this one

Please continue making fics about Furuichi and Lamia.

i love this story... i cried reading it! keep up the great work! looking forward for your other new story

Awesome work ! ;)

Who gave you d idea that ogaxaoi was a good idea, man, do some more ogaxhilda stuff, btw your furuichixlama angle sucked.

Sorry but I don't blindly praise stories. Your grammar is appaling and makes this quite tedios to read. Your story concept is excellent but the execution, not so much. I'm afraid I can't go any further than this. Good luck.

This is a great fabric! Goods job!

ITS VERY VERY VERY VERY ROMANTIC

y u copy the raining scene in fma? i mean the scene where roy mourns hughes death... :O