Sorry if my early comment sounded sarcastic, but I Ioved your story, and I hope you do well in life.

Wonderful story so far :)

This was definitely an interesting story that I don't regret reading, despite knowing from the start it was discontinued. At least you posted a theoretical summary of how the rest might have gone. I know it's actually a rewrite, but I'm just going to ignore that detail and staple the last few 'possibility chapters' onto the existing story and call it a day.

Good luck with whatever you are doing now and thanks for the read.

Wait... 'Fuzzy Pickles'? Was that an EarthBound reference? Yup, that's an EarthBound reference if I ever seen one!
Good story with humorous plot and serious moments. I like it.

I just read all 33 chapters within the last few hours and I was excited to see more until I got to this chapter. I actually went "Awww man" out loud. For what it's worth, I really liked your writing and I don't think it was something you should be ashamed of. I think you characterized everyone very well and gave life to your story. Also, thanks for posting your outlines of the story so I can get some closure. A lot of writers refused to do that for some reason. Still, such a shame. I was really enjoying the story and I do hope you change your mind in the future.

That was a fun reading while it lasted and those ideas you had for it were interesting. Anyway, thanks for the story!

Thank you for the wonderful story and for actually giving an outline of what would happen throughout it. There are too many stories that end without closure and I appreciate you at least giving the outline for the rest of it. Good luck with your game!

Not gonna lie, it's a bummer to hear but I can understand and you actually giving us the 'Whys' and actually giving a summary of sorts of the whole thing is more than enough. Thank you for writing this story and for also coming out and talking to us as to why you will not continue it.

I wish you the best of luck in life and that game of yours :)

tl;dr. hoping it picks up in future :P

Well I hope it's just another Hiatus as I've now caught up.

Even if it isn't I've enjoyed this story greatly.

Good Job Satori. That is an excellent way to make up for Mind reading, though you'd have to wonder what the difference in the level of detail would be.

I immediately went 'Oh shi-' when you mentioned sunflowers. Apparently your Yuuka likes kids but dislikes everyone else... huh.

also:
Good job Yukari!

Feeling displeased with Remilia plotting against her sister so viciously which means you wrote this well.

GODDAMNIT SEIGA

oh and I forgot about it when she last appeared but

GODDAMNIT YUKARI

You know when you really think about it Koishi's power is absolutely terrifying. She can manipulate the subconscious, and she could basically kill anyone in Gensokyo if she really wanted to. Just thinking about it is kind of chilling when you realize how much of the body is run by the unconscious, your heart beats unconsciously, you digest food, your body regulates it's temperature, if she really hated someone they could die any number of ways just from her picking one of the many parts of the body that works unconsciously and shutting it down, or making it overwork itself.

1000 yen would be approximately 10 dollars...