He came all the way over for her. Great plot, even better writing.

Gahh, this has such a lovely simplicity. It's one of those stories that you've heard again and again. The girl has a nightmare, the boy kisses her comfort. They're in bed together. Simple, typical story. I know I've read it a million times. But you, in that way you do, made it totally new. Maybe it's because it's Wally and Artemis, but I think it's more that you are very good at injecting interest
in even the most common of sentences. Your stories are sweet and intriguing, and I always want to read to the end. Great job, dear. :)

sorrowful and perfect

I loved this. This was really nice. Great job.

Very appropriate, simply realistic and very well-done. The Spitfire fandom needed this splice of simplicity, so thank you for this.

Also, I don't mean to be picky or annoying but: "She'd always have him and he'd always have her and there would always bee something." "Bee something" made me laugh because that is such an adorable typo.

Other than that, this was lovely!

I love this! This was written well!

Love it B)

This. was. AMAZING!

Yay! Spitfire! Beautiful!

That was a sweet short story. :)