Need more. Three chapters and you quite. Come on man. Not cool. (Plus i need to know what Souji/Yu's birthday present is)

I wanna find out! Please continue!

I love this story i would like more

. . . No updates? ;A;

It's almost Christmas you know... Maybe you should continue since yeah. It is a Christmas fanfiction.

All the good Yu/Souji x Naoto fanfics are on hiatus or dead. It's sad. :'(

i really like the story i hope you continue it

The updates ended!? :( Please update soon!

(Besides, I wanna see what Naoto got in store for Yu. Who doesn't?)

Good, lighthearted fun. Quite a nice fix, but disappointing that the updating seems to have stopped. :(

This is so cute. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Good chapter keep it up

Pretty cute, I must say. ? THINK OF THE CHILDREN. XD

Well, I got to say that this story definitely has the humor I was hoping for (Yosuke quoting shrek made my day)! Keep up the good work and enjoy your trip!

I will say... I can't see Naoto having that big of breasts...but. XD The Shrek reference was hilarious. And I just started seeing those Tales characters...so not sure yet. BTW. RICHARD. 3

While I did find the references to Tales of Graces and Shrek subtle and amusing... I do think that some of the jokes in this story could be taken in a more offensive manner. I realise you've rated this story "M", but there are tasteful ways to make open jokes that could be either completely innocent or "vulgar" - in a sense, I suppose I am saying be careful where you make them and how you go about making them. Throwing them in there just to be there (meaning no offence, but that is how it seems) often comes off as "childish humour".

Please understand, this is not meant to be a flame. I'm afraid my wording at times can be quite poor, but it is only my goal to offer advice that might help you in the long-run. I do apologise if this upset you in any way.

That aside, I hope you continue this story.

This seems as if it might hold an interesting plot, I will endeavour to read more as it comes out.

Though I am curious, where did you read about Souji/Yu's official birthday?

jgrsiaghishga. I read this. Kanji being Santa makes me happy. :3 I'll wait for you to update friend