Loved what's posted of this. Till next time indeed.

More please!

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

Can't wait for the next chapter and more please update soon love this story

Please update or make a sequel I won't to the reunion between the traitors and the four girls that have it bad for ash

This was a fantastic read well done

I like you OC Sonia. Also like the ladies you mentioned before. Hope you do harem, if you ever come back to this amazing story. Along with your other amazing stories you’ve written. This is one of the few Pokémon stories I like. Where Ash actually learns from his past losses and uses his Pokémon from before and actually catches some that would’ve helped him.

I really hope you and your stories come back to us dude. You must be going through some personal stuff that takes all your time.

I throughly enjoyed this story. It's one of the rare pokemon stories that works in written form. It was captivating and inspiring to read! I wish there were more. You did a great job!

The flamer below me is an absolutely appalling person. They are someone who loves to go around spreading hostility towards people they don't even know for no reason other than to be a dick. He probobaly read this gritting his teeth with jelously that they could never write a story with so many postive reviews (over 500 ehem...) or be able to even write so much as story worth even one. They orobably couldn't even so much as a write a 500 word story because it's probably too much of a challenge for them. He's probably a monumental gigantic failure as a person and a writer that people have a diffcult time dealing with because of the type of horrendous, depolrable he actually is and like a pathetic bully has to hide his identy and pray on others he knows are far more talented then him just so that he could feed is childish and shattered ego. He proboably has no friends or a life and just sits on his computer all day looking for someone else to be a violent, pathetic loser too.

I don't think you took this idiot seriously but if you did, just give him the finger cause he's just a jelous loser looking for something to fill the endless boredom in his life.

All your other readers sincerly love this story that has so many reviews. I'm a writer myself (though not on this site) and when I read this, it was so charming and written so well that it made me feel inspired. There are a few grammar mistakes but not so much that they impact the quality of the narrative. I loved reading this and loved the physical descriptions you gave to the characters.

They way Espeon reacted to Ash was just so cute showing there deep bond and the way he protected her was so nobel and something he would do even in his older age. The actions of the characters and the way they spoke to each-other were done in the way where life was breathed into them, something that's really hard to find here on this site. The reader feels very satisfied during the last chapter even if this fic wasn't finished but it gives way to the imagination of what would happen next.

Truthfully it felt like I was reading a light-novel and I love those types of stories. You have real talent as a writer and everybody knows it. Any time I need inspiration this fic right here is one that I'll be looking at for it. Where ever you are, keep up the great work!

I also forgot to supplement a few things to my previous review. Are you unaware of type disadvantages? Ice is not 'Super-effective' against fighting. Are you actually inbred, or did you reverse your words like the incompetent idiot that you are? And dark is NOT 'Super-effective' against bug/fighting moves either. Are you actually sped? Also, I don't believe that you are aware that when Ursaring uses Superpower, you must take 3 things into consideration: 1. It is not very effective, 2. It lowers Defense & Attack at the same time, and 3. Does Ursaring not have to fucking recharge, as you clearly made it obvious that for Ash's pokémon, it is a necessity. And Giga Impact is a base 150 Pwr move. -1.5 Def. to Ursaring would mean obliteration, even with Espeon's minimal attack stat. And what IDIOT uses 2 Recharge moves in a row? And lastly, stop amplifying the exaggeration of Paul's brutality towards pokémon. It's just fucking disturbing and absolutely gut-wrenching.

Honestly, I have many things to say about this story. Let us start with the positives:
The plot was somewhat good, key word being 'somewhat'. I liked the beginning of the story, as you see the main protagonist is beaten down to his knees, forced to be belittled by his opponent. But that is the only, and I mean only, good thing about this story. Other than that, you clearly stole the concept from other writers, making that introduction absolutely horrendous and even more cliché. Aside from that, even the dialogue was just terrible. It wasn't captivating in any way, and didn't draw my attention.

Along with these flaws, your grammar is absolutely disgusting. I literally retch at reading your words, as you clearly are incapable of spelling most 2nd grade words correctly, which is just sad. You missed several punctuation marks, and added them where they were completely redundant, improper capitalization, and many more mistakes that I can't even count. Sir, I'd rather you just never write again, as this is the epitome of trash. You shouldn't even be allowed to write with the criteria that you have displayed. The sad thing is, you took WAY too long to write a story that could be drawn by a preschooler with a crayon on a notepad. Absolutely despicable.

Also, there was much useless dialogue as they were completely arbitrary and had no contribution to the story. Too much dialogue as well. For ex.; Elite Four: all of them need to say something, "V.I.P Room"; all of them need to say something, once again? Fucking terrible. I can't even fathom why the amount of people give this such a good critique as you deserve -5 stars, sir.
I would like to suggest ways to improve this, but you're just another failure on the internet wanting to grasp others' attention. You're fucking trash, as a writer, and a human being.

Sad to see you gone, this was one of the few Cliche stories to do this stuff well! Made the Cliche's fun!

This story is reall cool and funny at the end! Good job vsizzel

update

yup! baddass...