Wow great writing shame it wasn't finished

I'm really loving this story! I did Peace Corps in Eastern Zambia for 28 months (right on the border of Malawi). I love that you brought up the fact that Callie was in the Peace Corps. It pissed me off that the writer's didn't acknowledge that when it was time for Arizona to go to Africa...If Callie had already had the experience in Botswana (which is pretty much the same as Malawi...I've been to both) she would have jumped at the chance to go back to Africa with Arizona. Never understood why the writers mad Callie not want to go with her..bad writing on GA(but I guess that's a drama for ya). Anyway, I'm glad I found this story b'c i was hoping to find one that brought this up! Would love it if it had an ending ;)

So sad that this story hasn't been finished. One of my favorites.

I agree this story deserves an ending!

Ohmygosh. This, THIS, is amazing! I am comparatively new to Calzona fanfiction, but being a newbie, I have devoured everything that comes my way. There are some pretty amazing fanfiction stories and there are some horrible ones. THIS is amazing. You have managed to capture the essences of the characters perfectly. Here, Callie and Arizona feel like Callie and Arizona. It doesn't seem off in any way- except maybe the uselessness of Arizona in the clinic. And I've always wanted someone to take the prompt of Callie going to Africa, or the prompt of Teddy telling Callie to go at the bar. Most Africa stories are kinda shaky. THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. You write each scene so well. Especially, the one where Callie gets beaten up and almost raped- that scene was awesome. She wasn't helpless and bimbette-y, but she stood up for herself, cause she's Callie and she's badass. And the transition of Arizona's moods from being all cheerful and happy to the faltering and then the fear and pain was so smooth, almost effortless. And the sub plots with Azibo, so exciting! Sorry, I guess I'm kinda hyperactive right now. But really though, you write really well.

Which is what brings me to my next point- WHY in the name of all the gods in this and every other universe, known or unknown, aren't you updating? I mean, everyone hates incomplete stories. Take The Terminal for example. Sure, tom Hanks got the signatures, but what happened with him and Catherine Zeta-Jones, and the whole thing about "destiny"? So not definitive. It's annoying. Sorry. Excuse my rambling. All I'm saying is all great stories deserve an ending. So does saying your story made my day provide a teeny tiny bit of incentive to give us another chapter? Pretty please?

I know you have a life, unlike me. But please, can you update as soon as possible? Even if you plan of ending it (but a multi-chapter fic is never shied away).

FallenRose24, you are skilled and you are awesome. I must have wasted 5 minutes of your life already, so I'll sign off. I didn't mean to be offensive or prejudiced or hypocritical or patronizing or offensive in any way.

xoxo
Caskett41097

Please tell me this will be finished?

Please finish this. Pretty please.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon?

Update?

I'm hooked on this story :)

Can't wait for the the last chapter!

I saw this was updated and waited till I gas a quiet afternoon to read and savour it. Once again I loved it. I know they are going home soon and I know you have a life too but i think this is what shondas show off the map could have been. It's great to see them grow and share as a couple and I like the Africa storyline
Please post again soon

So glad Callie was not seriously injured! Hoping we get to see a bit of their life and happiness back home!

wow what a chapter well written. sad to think it will be over in just 2 chapters. I just love super long stories.

Sad chapter... Callie isn't hurt worse.