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   Timid Otaku chapter 7 . 7/27/2012 Update soon! |
| LittleGambitDanilae chapter 7 . 7/13/2012 ok ... im addicted to this story! i hope to see more of the darkside of italy |
| BlueRavenQuill chapter 7 . 7/13/2012 That was a really nice chapter, but is Italy going to forget what happened to him? I get that his physical wounds heal quickly since he's a nation, but is it the same for mental and emotional ones? Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| Pheonix476 chapter 7 . 7/13/2012 You are soo Evil! First of all for making Russia a bloodthirsty villian and torturing :( Sorry for writing so much bias and this story is really awesome |
| Pheonix476 chapter 6 . 7/13/2012 Oh no! Italy! |
| MISSxANONYMOUS chapter 7 . 7/13/2012 This is absolutely cute..and sad..but mostly cute fluff |
| Timid Otaku chapter 6 . 7/12/2012 *russia style aura with a kind smile* please do hurry up, I want to know what happens or I'll devour your soul,k? I'm the princess of death after all. |
| BlueRavenQuill chapter 6 . 7/10/2012 Ooh, so what's gonna happen (if) Italy wakes up? Germany came for him, but it was so sad to see that he thought it was Holy Roman Empire. Looking forward to seeing what's next. |
| MISSxANONYMOUS chapter 6 . 7/10/2012 So mean, you got Italy raped and then he killed himself, or tried to. XD HE MUST GO CUPCAKES TO BE AT ULTIMATE EVIL. |
| BlueRavenQuill chapter 5 . 7/10/2012 Ooh, wonder if Germany will get there in time. Looking forward to the next chapter. :) |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/10/2012 Ack! Clifhanger! XD good job drawing the reader in! Can't wait to see what happens next, even though I feel terrible for poor Italy. You are such a quick updater! I'm jealous. talk to you soon, I hope! XD |
| MISSxANONYMOUS chapter 5 . 7/9/2012 CRAP ITALY GET GET OUT OF THERE! |
| KeepCalmAndHaveATomato chapter 5 . 7/9/2012 nuuuuu! |
| crystal-chan chapter 4 . 7/9/2012 I like the current chapter title! it's indicative of both the battle and Italy's state. :3 I liked the flashback too-well placed. excellent! hope you can update soon |
| crystal-chan chapter 3 . 7/9/2012 Eeee this is turning out so well! I love it! two things: 1st, the japanese word for two is Ni. XD Nii means brother or two of something. I speak Japanese, Spanish and a little Chinese, so if you need help with those, I'm readily available! 2nd, You may want to keep all German conversations to a minimum. It's really good to throw in some phrases and words in a language other than english-keeps the flavor of Hetalia and it's worldliness going. But when you have too much in a row, readers sometimes get annoyed. I think it was all in German because that's how Angela Merkel and Ludvig would talk, but then you might just want to preface the conversation with something like : "he answered immediately, in concise German" or something. But if you had a lot of fun with the German part, I'd say keep doing it. Writing is, in the end, about what the author wants to put down on the page. You should do what you enjoy! I just wanted to let you know what I'd noticed. :3 If I'm annoying you can just tell me to shove off. |
