I love the bleach moment great chapter

This is a very interesting fic that for sure and I like it as well.

Is this story still going on?

this sounds good, i cant wait to see the reaction to hinata leaving or how kakash trains them

Nice Idea .. Im looking forward to read next chapter :)

Love the story so far :)

more!

I haven't seen this story in a while! Keep going!

This story needs a little work. When I'm reading it, everything seems jumbled and mashed together, like each sentence is unrelated to the ones before it. Some transition sentences would help that a lot. Other than that, I only have two real concerns. First: Naruto is six years old, and isn't going to plan for exactly six years on his own. That specific period of time should be decided by the Hokage or Kakashi. Second: thoughts should be italicized, not bold. It feels like you're yelling at the reader this way.

Nice beginning to a beautiful story

Good so far. Update soon.

Just one thing that's really important.

"He touched the Hyuga princess! Now we have to kill her too!"

Really? The sheep aren't THAT stupid. Don't forget Hinata has a vengeful clan leader Dad, and killing her would...

A) Upset the power balance and possibly cause problems..MANY PROBLEMS.

B)Extremely pissed clan.

Result: possible civil war between civilians and ninja. These things are really fragile, especially in a ninja village.

good start, update soon! just out of interest, will they meet anyone on their training trip? this seems to be a good story.

interesting looking forward to your next chapter

An excellent chapter, keep up the great work :)

Looking forward to read this a second time around. Glad that it's back.