Wow... Really emotional! I've got no idea why you've only got a few reviews! This is super well written, and has an interesting plot. Love it. D

That is so cute!

I love your use of words. Stories seem to intrigue me the most when authors use colorful palates. It keeps things interesting, and the reader may also learn a new word or two. I also find the impression Deidara's personality gives to fit perfectly with his character. This was a very well written story :)

...ALOT of squealing from me while reading this,I got seriously funny looks from my class mates :P and it's your fault for writing such fluffy amazingness :3

Awesome story! i literally live off of stuff like this xD

Cant wait for more!