| Reviews for Naruto: To become a great ninja! |
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   thegrison chapter 2 . 8/4 Future tip. Do NOT put songs or song lyrics in your stories. Songs are different for everybody. A song that makes 1 person happy could make another sad, mad, guilty, or many other things. Look at the best writers. They use very few songs or music in a story. They create a feeling by telling about things in the area or how it feels. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2019 Absolutely fucking retarded |
| gabelou1991 chapter 2 . 8/7/2018 J'aime car cela aurait pu arriver car Kakashi a vu arriver cela. |
| FMA-Fangirl33 chapter 2 . 4/11/2018 BEAUTIFUL! I would've liked more to be honest... |
| my 2 guys chapter 2 . 4/8/2018 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| Bosma19 chapter 2 . 1/26/2018 Please update |
| god of all chapter 2 . 9/15/2017 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| Shayging518 chapter 2 . 8/17/2017 Please update soon |
| Shade chapter 2 . 4/11/2017 Shame you didn't continue with this i would of liked to of seen this one go on, even more then your other fanfictions apart from the 'fishcake affairs'. |
| Dragonfyre1234 chapter 1 . 12/30/2016 This naruto is a freaking badass |
| Mitobu chapter 2 . 10/14/2016 they're not 16 yet, they should be closer to 13 by this point of the story. just something I was thinking about while reading, and was hoping to see a bit of explanation for it if it was on purpose. anyway, loving the story so far and hoping to see more in the future, really enjoy your writing style |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/7/2016 Update please |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/23/2016 if you are making Naruto x Mei pairing then give naruto a big dick so he can satisfy a mature woman |
| LittleRed8801 chapter 2 . 12/31/2015 When is your next chapter coming out! Me want! |
| The Kromann chapter 1 . 9/2/2015 I just finished reading the only two chapters out and I gotta say that this is one of your best. Will you ever update it again? I have a thirst for more. |
