Wow, what a tragic, horrific masterpiece. Very well done, true to the genre. Really balanced work and effective writing. I guessed the ending, but I was still extremely satisfied by it, right down to the very last line of the story. I was engrossed throughout the whole piece and am especially impressed by your characterizationit was perfect. Sebastian was every inch the unfeeling, hungry demon yet fulfilled Ciel's orders without fail, even when ordered to comfort him. Great work!

Wow what a story

My God... I knew it would be dark, but not THAT dark. Just... wow. Still good though, in a dark, horrifying way. I applaud you.

Poor Ciel he's so broken.

So achingly beautiful in a mad way. I like the incorporation of Alice. The ending was perfect.

Damn wow I lost interest in the fandom but woah its good I did not see that plot twist ah well your an incredible writer ciao .

That was beautiful.

Oh my gosh! This was absolutely amazing. I couldn't stop reading it for anything. Ugh, I am sad it ended, but all good things must come to an end. However, I'll be checking around your page and seeing if you have anything else up. Keep up the great work, dearest! C:

Wow, a tragic ending for such a beautiful story. Well, then, I guess we should carry on with that. PLEASE, if you ever come back to , bring us another Black Butler fic. I'm sure it's going to be amazing.

Good luck.

I was captivated by the scene with Ciel, experimentally touching Sebastian. It had never occurred to me before that Ciel might be the dominant one in the relationship, and after considering what Ciel had went through, it does make sense as to why Ciel would want to be on top. I have seen now Ciel could make a really interesting dominant, even if I prefer him as a uke, personally. Either way is good though, thanks to your excellent writing. :)
I enjoy it a lot.

Sebastian sniffing Ciel. That was priceless. It is one of my favorite parts of the story, and then Sebastian having to admit to it. I personally enjoyed the end as well, where Sebastian gives Ciel his demonic blood. It was a nice scene.

I really do enjoy the interactions between Sebastian and Ciel. They're, in my opinion, completely in character. The asthma scene I didn't even realize was crucial to Ciel's character until this time reading it, for, the first time I read it, I thought it was a bonus you added in, as I had not yet read more of the manga, where it clearly states Ciel has asthma, something I don't recall the Anime doing so blatantly. I know now of course and I think it was written well. I am also glad Ciel got some form of closure, hurting the people that hurt him. They deserved what they got. I enjoyed the ending as well, Ciel wanting a comforting touch, and Sebastian, unsure how to go about it at first. Sebastian being a demon, it makes sense, so, it was a nice end to the chapter, I think.

I was, and am glad Ciel got some satisfaction. Another brilliant chapter.

This is another chapter I positively enjoy. It is incredibly dark, and explicit. It is too hard to find similar writers, not afraid to test deeper, darker waters. It is also something I find to be original, the happenings in the asylum.

I have read this particular chapter more times then I would like to admit, floating about, just a ghost until a bit ago, and now I can comment and so I will. This is my favorite Kuroshitsuji fanfic I have ever read so far. It is beautifully written, the imagery is perfect. There is nothing confusing about what happens. One isn't left to an imagination they may, or may not have, and the trauma and horror is written extremely well. One can really get a feel of what's going on, and not many people can portray that well, but you can. It is safe to say that you can count me as a good fan of this fanfiction of yours. This even prompted me to by the Alice video game. I have yet to play it, but I own it. I rather enjoy this writing very much. I really also do enjoy how I think Ciel stayed in character, and did not become, "OOC." It is most amazing of an fanfic and I do hope you, if you have not, one day, pursue a career in writing, as I believe you have what it takes.