This started slowly but built up wonderfully. It’s sad though how Arashi’s parents are against Kagome. Hopefully they don’t raise too much of a stink. I hope Kagome shows her wisdom and power and wins over the family/court soon (I guess the good thing about drabbles is that it’ll likely be light hearted and won’t go too deep into depressing prejudices and stuff). At first I thought Arashi was going to be her son but now I’m confused since Arashi’s son’s also called Sesshomaru, I thought she’d get paired up with Arashi…but baby Sesshy only has one stripe not two on his cheek and no moon on his forehead (or do they grow later?)…so is something going to happen to Arashi’s mama and she hook up with his dad? Kya! Oh the suspense. I loved your Arashi and baby Sesshy btw!

The story’s great. Only thing is the beginning was very slow. I think the first 3 chapters could’ve been put into one because had it not been an Inutaisho story, I may have stopped at chapter 2, it wasn’t bad just fillers for first two chapters is a bit long without something to catch one’s interest. I think it’s good you dropped the short word/drabble limit and went with the flow. While I like some drabbles, I have to admit they are few as I find they tend to break up the story and this story seems better suited for a multi-chaptered long story (it could still work with drabbles but I think they would have to be longer and you’d need to pay attention to make sure the story remains smooth and not interrupted, awkward or jumpy - you’ve been doing a good job on the last few chapters).

There were some minor spelling errors as follows for your future reference - deceived not decieved, perceived not percieved. Separated not seperated. The errors weren’t too distracting but if you’re interested in improving, I suggest using the spellcheck in Word (or other free word processing programs), while not 100% accurate, they catch the majority of spelling errors. You just need to keep one eye on the pesky autocorrect function as you type (or turn it off).

Great job for your first FF! You have the makings of a great story here, it’s interesting and your writing style’s good. I hope you’re well and you finish this someday. BTW I loved this story so much that when I got to your last chapter and Inuyasha came up I almost groaned. Why, you ask? Since there are not many chapters in this story and they’re very short, each little paragraph is so precious…and I wanted to go back to Kagome and Arashi with baby Sesshy rather than a foul tempered hanyou! XD (Not saying that part’s bad and at some point in the story, it would’ve been nice to see that shot where Inutachi realizes the well’s stopped working but it’s early on the in the story and since I was at the last available chapter, I felt the cussing hanyou was taking away precious time from baby Sesshy. Lol. That’s how much you’d drawn me into the story. Good stuff :)

awww baby sesshomaru! love this

Plz ads another chapter soon
I can't wait to see what happens next

Please put up chapter 16 soon and hurry and i hope kagome get to stay with arashi

i relly like this story will there be new chaps soon?

This is an awesome story and I LOVE IT! Please keep up the writing and posting of the chapters. :)

Ah! The wonderful and powerfull impacto of a baby. Doing what no one else though of.

This seems pretty interesting. I'll have to follow this.

Dun dun DUUNNN! Brilliant! Hope you update soon :D

Kawaii! Sesshy-poo is so cute! I still have that feeling though... ;)

Sara!

Please put up chapter 16 soon and hurry

Meh! It was a good try. ;) Loved the chapter, update real soon!

Sara!

Please put up chapter 15 soon and hurry

Kyaa! Awww! Baby shessy!
I'm loving this! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Uh meh gawd! Why do I have a feeling that Arashi is actually the Inu No Taisho and his son is going to be THE Sesshomaru and he will have a kid with a princess named Izayoi and... ugh, that sentence was soooooooo complicated (not really). Uh, I don't know.

Love the story though, update soon!

Sara!

Please put up chapter 14 soon and hurry