This was such a great story

awesome fic

Great stuff ; how about a review to Desperate Times For a Manipulating Mind. Would be interesting to see JJ & Cole hook up.

This is one of the best stories that i have ever read on here! I have a small request if you are thinking of making a new JJ and Spencer story. i think you should have a story with Spencer Battling drug addiction. i have not seen it done on here, and when i have it was not done well, just a suggestion though! loved the story!

I normally don't review stories, but, I just have to thank you for this & wonder why it doesn't have more reviews than it does.
This is, quite possibly, the best fanfiction I've ever read, on this site or anywhere else. You've got a great mastery of English that really shines through. This kept me on my seat. Every time I'd get comfortable, you'd push the story line a bit more. I was physically relieved by the end of everything.
And you took risks. The branding. Having Spencer find Tony & get injured. Those typically don't spell HEA, but you made them.
This is also the first story in which I've read that JJ was a sexual being all in herself, and it read nicely.
The characters were so refreshingly likable & real that I almost regret finishing it so quickly.
Thank you for the amazing time.

Short but beautiful ending. :) Thank you for the long ride.

LaRieN

The story was pretty good in parts, I just really don't think stories that have 90% angst and only 1-2 chapters of rebuilding/reunion do the story justice. JJ went through so much terrible stuff that to not even really experience happy times with Reid again...I dunno, it almost feels like she never got past it, the epilogue (to me) didn't change my mood after reading all of the 40 chapters.

I only found this story after you completed it so I read it in 1 go, but yeah I liked big parts of it, but it didn't feel like they got a happy ending at all

That was a lovely ending. Even though I'm not a Will-hater, I think the two of them together like that is beautiful. And it's about time something went right for Reid.

I'm so happy to see that JJ and Reid had their happily ever after. This was a great story! I was anxiously waiting for the next update and the conclusion. Such excellent work! I'm so happy to see that hey were getting married, starting their lives together. I love how she hid her scars with the tattoo, it's perfect. Great work!

Arwennicole

Very much enjoyed this story. It was well written, the characters were realistic and in canon in behaviour. The plot was well thought out and your own characters were very well drawn. Please more soon from you especially with a JJ/Reid 'ship!

Hey! I'm glad you back.

They went to hell and back. They are strong people, with all the help from the team and each other, their nightmares will be over, eventually.

This is one the most well crafted story in this fanworld that I have read. It engrossed me from the beginning and I read it in one go despite being aware it was not complete, something I do rarely. You have created a whole scenario that could easily be part of the series with the characters neatly in canon, especially the two leads of Reid and JJ. The OC characters are also well drawn and three dimensional and you created a believable and horrific unsub. Your pace is good, allowing for the reader to catch breath and filling in the plot where it is necessary. The detail in your description is excellent and you manage all the scenes from the sexual to the violent to the nightmares with precision.
I would hope that that you do complete this for all your readers' sakes and that you continue to write for this fandom as I need more! Well done and thank you.

Please update soon. It's been ages!

This story is too good. Please update soon.

Love this chapter! So excited they're finally reunited! But I'm also sad that this story is almost over. :( I really look forward to a new update each wednesday. So... You'll be starting another JJ/ Reid story ASAP right? ;) seriously though, great chapter, and I'm glad everyone got what was coming to them. Can't wait for the next update!