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Very funny at the end! Good story.

Good first chapter. It woould be nive if you did some kind of indicating that you were switching from Vin's situation to the rest of the boys. Maybe a line or star or more of a space. Anyway, I do like your story.

You had the characters down in this as a first attempt. It is nice to see all the 7 in a story and interacting. Well done.