So, how old was Penny when she died?
So very sad though.

You have written such a beautiful, poignant one shot! Having helped someone very close to me go through a similar situation, this story is wonderfully honest and tackles the issue perfectly. I can't express how great this is! Congratulations on a job well done!

this story is so sad! it made me cry :(( but WOW, you are such an amazing writer! like, seriously. so sad but so so good.

:'( so sad

This was sooo sad. I was crying through he whole story.

You know a story is really good when you reach the end emotionally exhausted, and that's exactly what happened to me with this one. The way you wrote them.. ugh, I have no words.
I've read plenty of stories where either Finn or Rachel die, and it's always hard to lose the one person you love the most, but I imagine that losing a child is the worst loss of all and you portrayed it perfectly.

Well that was one hell of an emotional roller coaster. There were so many times I stopped myself from crying like a little girl. It really was too amazing to put into words. Phenomenal job :)

Absolutly love it! incredibly sad but really well could really feel everything...I normally dont read sad stories but this was really good.

Sad. Good. (I can only manage mono-syllables after reading that.)

Oh man, that got me! Beautifully done!

This was so sad! I'm sobbing right now. But very well written. I loved it' great job'

nice work

Oh, god, that was heart-wrenching. Tough subject to tackle, and you did it well.

I can't believe how sad this story was - it felt so real! I can't believe how much I'm crying right now. WOW, very powerful indeed. Will this story be continued? My heart breaks for Finchel :-(

So I bawled. I mean, seriously Eera! No one does tragedy/angst like you, sweetie! This was not only super emotional and poignant, but the moments where Finn and Rachel pull each other back to one another are probably some of the best FR moments I've read in fanfic.

I have to confess though that the reason I read this was 'cause I've been STARVING - yes, *STARVING!* - for some more of your writing. Paint you By Numbers and Nerve Damage are amazing and I can't wait for you to update them! Ordinarily I wouldn't read something where you warn us that the angst is "pretty major" 'cause I'm a chicken :P

Anyway, this was another one of your masterpieces! Brava, darling! :)